Englisch Übersetzung

So .. hab mir was zusammen geschrieben, bin mir aber nicht sicher, ob alles richtig geschrieben wurde. Kann mal jemand schaun`, ob ich Fehler drin hab? Danke :)


If you have a part-time job, you are maybe not concentrated on school and you have much stress because of your job. Maybe you have a disadvantage, too. Some teenagers need more time for school and haven`t time for a job. Many teenagers spend their money for their free time an not for living. They get food and something else from home. But part-time jobs are good to learn about the life and about important job-related skills. They learn how to communicate with other people. I haven`t a part-time job, because I have to learn for school and I`m too lazy for it. But earning money is good. You can buy what you want : Video games, make-up, CD`s and DVD`s or something else. You can see it as a change of your everyday life. Try it, if you want!