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First day at school

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Describe:first day at school

My first day at school was very exciting.
I was curious to saw who will be in my class. When i looked in the list (sheet),I saw that I was in the class 3bs. Then I saw my friends. We were with my friends in same class. The we searched the way to our class. Front of the classroom I saw my friends from secondary school. They were in other class. When we went to class I saw new visions. The we sat. We saw our classroom and waited our teacher. Then came our teacher and speak about yourself. Afterwards we make a groups and draw his image and then you speak bout the hobbies what do you thing. The day was for me wonderful.

Explain: prepare for the first day
At first I prepare my clothes what I will get dressed.
I gave in my bag notice book and pencils.
I sleep early and make a brekafast before i went to school.
After the breakfast I brushed teeth.
Then I went to school.

Give advice: to behave

The behave of the student should be friendly, respectful to teacher, open-minded to everyone and dont disturb classes. In the lessons dont chew gum.
Frage von Esra39 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 13.11.2015 - 19:44


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13		 Antwort von Esra39 (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.11.2015 - 19:59
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Describe:first day at school

My first day at school was very exciting.
I was curious to saw who will be in my class. When i looked in the list (sheet),I saw that I was in the class 3bs. Then I saw my friends. We were with my friends in same class. The we searched the way to our class. Front of the classroom I saw my friends from secondary school. They were in other class. When we went to class I saw new visions. The we sat. We saw our classroom and waited our teacher. Then came our teacher and speak about yourself. Afterwards we make a groups and draw his image and then you speak bout the hobbies what do you thing. The day was for me wonderful.

Explain: prepare for the first day
At first I prepare my clothes what I will get dressed.
I gave in my bag notice book and pencils.
I sleep early and make a brekafast before i went to school.
After the breakfast I brushed teeth.
Then I went to school.

Give advice: to behave

The behave of the student should be friendly, respectful to teacher, open-minded to everyone and dont disturb classes. In the lessons dont chew gum.


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13		 Antwort von elen121 (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.11.2015 - 23:41
My first day at school was very exciting. I was curious to see who will be in my class. When i looked at the list (sheet),I saw that I was in the class 3bs. Then I saw my friends and I saw that we are all in the same class . Then we searched the way to our class. In the front of the classroom I saw my friends from secondary school. They were in an other class. When we went to class I saw new visions ( -> was möchtest du denn damit sagen?) . Then we sat down . We saw our classroom and waited for our teacher. Once our teacher came, she started to tell us some things about herself . Afterwards we split up in groups and we had to draw a picture of him . Then we spoke about our hobbies . I really had a wonderful day!
Explain: prepare for the first day
At first I prepared an outfit that I was going to wear.
I put pencils and paper in my bag.
I went to bed early and I ate breakfast before school.
After the breakfast I brushed my teeth.
Then I went to school.

Give advice: to behave

The behavior of the student should be friendly, respectful to the teacher, open-minded to everyone and dont disturb classes. In the lessons don`t chew gum.


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0		 Antwort von Sweet_Cherry | 15.11.2015 - 21:53
Du benutzt ziemlich oft das Wort then. Vielleicht kannst du es mit irgendwas anderen ersetzten oder sogar ganz weglassen? z.B. statt then we searched the way usw. kannst du together we searched the way usw. schreiben. Ist nur ein Vorschlag. Ansonsten grammatisch ist alles korrekt.


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13		 Antwort von Esra39 (ehem. Mitglied) | 17.11.2015 - 19:21
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My work experience

Hello, my name is Esra and i`m 19 year old. I have work in Christmas in a turkish supermarket.

Every morning I stand up at 7:00 o`clock. Together I dressed up and go to my workplace. At first i eat a breakfast at my workplace. Then I make my work.

Most of my time I must be to arrange the shelves. I also know exactly, where the things about. For example fruits, vegtables, sweets and anything abouts.I love it to spent my time for the customers, where you ask me, where the product is. It makes me also happy when I can the model worker. The staff at the work was very friendly to me. If I don`t can it, then you help me.

For this reason, I have a lot of experience. For example.: I learned it, how you make a chasier. What you make, when you have a problem. But I have more in the area with shelves. I arrange the shelves. When we became a new products, then I arrange the new products to shelves.

This was my work in Christmas. For me was this beautiful, because now I have Work experience and i learned lot of people.

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