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Hey Yaman,

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LG Janina.

Helloclass,

currently I watch 10 different television series. I like watching series, as more than films. You have entertainment for a longer period of time and you always can’t await the nextepisode. So, there is always tension. I especiallylike American or Turkish series, but German productions not at all. There aresome differences between Turkish and American or German TV series.

Here you see a poster of a Turkish series. The name of the series is “Intikam”and means “revenge”. And yes, this series based on the American series“revenge”. I want to tell you a bit about the story of Intikam. In IntikamYagmur Özden buys a house next to the Arsoys family mansion. Yagmur is actually Derin Celik, whose father,Adil Celik, was sentenced to life imprisonment for a non-committed crime whenshe was a little girl. Because of the imprisonment, Derin and her father wereseparated and he died as a result of an attack. As an adult, Derin alias Yagmurwants to revenge everyone who were involved in the conspiracy of her father.Her primary target is Sahika, leader of the Arsoy family, who loved andDerins`s father and cheated on him.

The running time of each episode is only 90 minutes, because most Turkish TVseries have a running time between 120 and 150 Minutes. So it is, as if you watched a film in series. A season begins usually in September and ends usuallyin June, when the 3 months-holidays start in turkey. So, episodes and seasonsare much longer. But that’s not all. At the beginning of each episode ofAmerican or German series, there is a short summarizing flashback, but the flashbacks of Turkish series aremuch longer. Flashbacks are 30 to 60 minutes long. I find it handy(?) (vllt. Unnecessary-unnötig)   because you have no time to hang around everytime in front of TV for 2 hours.

I think everyone knows the primetime here in Germany. It’s the same in turkeybut you have to remember the 1 hour time difference. Because a lot of Turkslive outside Turkey especially in Germany, there are extra European or Germanversions of the Turkish series channels. The television program is the same butthe television advertising is designed for the German market. So TV channels do business, even if foreigners watch TV. When we alreadytalk about business: Turkish series are also very popular outside turkey. Someseries were aired in about 60 different countries. Turkish TV series areespecially popular in near east, but also in Europe and even in Asia, for example in China. Either a series is bought and translated or a new series isproduced. FOX, for example, bought the rights of the Turkish series “SON” andwill produce an own series called “Runner”. Runner will be aired in Septemberthis year in America. Rights were also sold to Russia and Germany, where theseries will be aired in 2016.