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Hey,
ich sollte einen Text auf Englisch schreiben.
Nur bin ich cniht gerade die beste in Englisch und ich weiß das ich sehr viele grammatische Fehler habe!
Hilft ihr mir den Text zu korrigieren!

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Hello,
my name is Harry and I`m come from leicester, a little town in England.
orginally my familiy and I come from Banjiabi. I`m 20 years old and I`m already have married for three years a Indiangirl from Bunjiabi, oh no, I had not selected my wife but that my parents done it.Usually they showed youa photo of a girl or a boy and you must accept that you will marrie this person. I have not a problem with my fate.I`m satisfied. I have a beautiful wife and someday we will have beautiful kids. At the moment I`m living with my wife and my family in one house. The mood is not very well, because of the reason that my younger brother is differnt like us. He is sixteen and will finish the school soon. After the school he is to marry a Bunjiabi girl, too but he does not want it. He starts rebelling against his parents to arrange a marriage for his son. My father arranges a meeting with the father of the daughter who supposed to marrie my brother Manny.My father does not accept that manny does not want to marrie this girl and accusation Manny bacause of the reason that Manny is a Punjiabi and he does not think that he is a better man as we. He does not supposed to ruin his familiy name. My family and I agreed that we will fly with Manny to Bunjiabi and will do everything for that taht Manny will marrie a girl.
Frage von Jessica1992 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 20.04.2010 - 16:38

 
 Antwort von GAST | 20.04.2010 - 22:48
Hello,
my name is Harry and I….. come from Leicester,
a little town in England. .... My family and I originally come from Banjiabi. I`m 20 years old and I….. .. have already been married for three years to an Indian.... woman from Bunjiabi, oh no, I did not select my wife but that was done bymy parents .....they usually show you a photo of a girl or a boy and you must accept that you will marrythis person. I have not got a problem with my fate. I`m satisfied. I have a beautiful wife and some day we will have beautiful kids. At the moment I`m living with my wife and my family in one house. The.... atmosphere is not very .... good, because .... my younger brother is different from us. He is sixteen and will finish ... school soon. After ... school he is to marry a Bunjiabi girl, too, but he does not want...to. He starts rebelling against his parents... who want to arrange a marriage for his their son. My father has arranged a meeting with the father of the .... girl who is supposed to marry my brother Manny. My father does not accept that Manny does not want to marry this girl and accusation Manny bacause of the reason that Manny is a Punjiabi and he does not think that he is a better man as we. He does not supposed to ruin his familiy name. My family and I agreed that we will fly with Manny to Bunjiabi and will do everything for that taht Manny will marrie a


den Rest schaff ich nicht mehr; was ist nun richtig? Punjiabi / Bunjiabi / Banjiabi?
In die letzten Sätze kann keoin Sinn mehr hineinkonstruiert werden.

fett = korrigiert bzw. eingefügt ; ....= hier wurde gestrichen

Lorli


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13		 Antwort von Liz2910 (ehem. Mitglied) | 20.04.2010 - 23:11
Hello,
my name is Harry and I`m from Leicester, a little town in England. My family and I am from Banjiabi, originally.
I`m 20 years old but I`m already married for three years to an Indian girl who`s from Banjiabi, too. I didn`t get to choose my wife on my own, that`s what my parents did.
In Bunjiabi, it`s usual you are shown a photograph of the girl you are going to marry. I do not have a problem with this fate. I`m satisfied. I have a beautiful wife and someday we`ll have beautiful children.
At the moment I`m living with my wife and my family in one house. The athmosphere isn`t very well because of the reason that my younger brother is differentfromus.
He is sixteen and he`ll finish the school soon. After his graduation, he is fated to marry a Bunjiabi girl, too but he does not want it. He starts rebelling against our parents who are going to arrange his wedding like they did for me.
My father likes to arrange a meeting with the father of the daughter who is supposed to marry my brother Manny. My father won`t accept that Manny doesn`t want to marry this girl and accuses my brother for his behaviour. (Lass den Rest am besten weg.) My family and I agreed that we are going to do everything to save the family name even if it`s to fly to Bunjiabi and to get Manny married.

__Ohne Gewähr. Hoffe, es hilft dir.


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13		 Antwort von Liz2910 (ehem. Mitglied) | 20.04.2010 - 23:19
Hello,
my name is Harry and I`m from Leicester, a little town in England. My family and I are from Banjiabi, originally.
I`m 20 years old but I`m already married for three years to an Indian girl who`s from Banjiabi, too. I didn`t get to choose my wife on my own, that`s what my parents did.
In Bunjiabi, you are shown a photograph of the girl you are going to marry, as is the custom. I do not have a problem with this fate. I`m satisfied. I have a beautiful wife and someday we`ll have beautiful children.
At the moment I`m living with my wife and my family in one house. The athmosphere isn`t very well because of the reason that my younger brother is different from us.
He is sixteen and he`ll finish school soon. After his graduation, he is fated to marry a Bunjiabi girl, too, but he doesn`t want this. He started rebelling against our parents who are going to arrange his wedding like they did for me.
My father likes to arrange a meeting with the father of the daughter who is supposed to marry my brother Manny. My father won`t accept that Manny doesn`t want to marry this girl and accuses my brother for his behaviour. (Lass den Rest am besten weg.) My family and I agreed that we are going to do everything to save the family name even if it`s to fly to Bunjiabi and to get Manny married.

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