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A life without a mobile phone: Korrigieren, bitte !

Frage: A life without a mobile phone: Korrigieren, bitte !
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Hallo Leute :) .. wäre echt cool wenn ihr mein Text den ich auf english geschrieben habe einmal korregieren könnt :)


A life without a mobile phone !

I can´t imagine a life without mobile phone. There are so many phone types that the chose for a phone is very difficult. You can pay for a phone a lot of money.
But the best thing for the phone is that you can call with it. I call every day to my friends to talk about the new story´s and private things. When I go out to play with my friends soccer, I take my mobile phone with me. To talk with my phone without limits I have made a flat rate from the brand Vodafone. Its very important for me to be in every situation in connection with my parents and friends, because when I have a accident I can call my friend or parent to help me. Of course I know the danger about the radioactivity. But the danger is so small that I don´t think about that. My dad has a touch screen phon0e from the brand Apple. Its a very good designed phone and his applications are very comfortable to use. I think in the future we get a new technology from phones with applications to talk with an little computer in the phone or something like that.

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Frage von Pianist94 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 08.12.2011 - 19:29

 
Antwort von GAST | 08.12.2011 - 19:53
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I can´t imagine a life without amobile phone. There are so many phone types that the choice for a phone is very difficult. You can pay a lot of money for a phone.
But the best thing for the phone is that you can call with it. I call my friends to talk about the new stories and private things every day. When I go out to play soccer with my friends ,
I take my mobile phone with me. In order to talk with my phone without limits I have got a flat rate with [---] Vodafone. Its very important for me to be in connection with my parents and friends in every situation, because if I have a accident I can call my friend or parent to help me. Of course I know of the danger about [----] radioactivity. But the danger is so small that I don´t think about that. My dad has an Apple touch screen phone . Its a very well designed phone and its applications are very comfortable to use. I think in the future we`llget a new technology for phones with applications to talk with a small computer in the phone or something like that.


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Antwort von Pianist94 (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.12.2011 - 19:59
danke für deine Hilfe :)

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