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Smart phones and Ipads have become more popular in our society. Many people have an Ipad but there are more people who have a smart phone. Having one of them makes the life much easier because anything you have used before is now availabe in your smart phone or Ipad. Therefore, I am going to present you reasons why I enjoy reading texts on my smart phone.


There are different smart phones but the most of them have the same features. Everybody who has a smart phone is able to connect with the internet. For example, there you are able to read any news that are online. This kind of reading makes people very fexible. For instance, people tend to read news on their smart phone when they have to wait for the next train. Furthermore, reading on the smart phone is more comfortable than reading in the book because a smart phone is smaller than a book. Therefore, it is easier to take the smart phone with you. Moreover, people are able to read differend kind of news or magazines at the same time. They have the opportunity to choose a lot of topics that are found on the internet. Sport, politics or economics are possibilities which people have, for example.

In conclusion, I prefer reading on my smart phone than in the book because of three reasons. First it makes people more fexible. Second it is comfortable to use in comparison with a book. In addition, there are many types of texts which are available on the internet. Nevertheless, a smart phone is more expensive than a book or newspaper.
Frage von bombi (ehem. Mitglied) | am 12.12.2012 - 21:22


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Antwort von goldenoldie (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.12.2012 - 12:54
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Smart phones and Ipads have become more popular in our society

wenn du den einfachen Komaparativ "more" nimmst,
brauchst einen "Vergleich": more than ...
Nimm daher "more and more"


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Having one of them makes the life much easier

"life" ist hier ein abstraktes, nicht näher definiertes Nomen, du darfst daher keinen bestimmten Artikel setzen.

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because anything you have

dies ist ein Satz mit einer positiven Aussage, daher "everything"

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but the most ofthem have

rtypisch deutscher Übersetzungsfehler "die meisten" heißt "most of them"

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to read any news that are online

"news" ist ein Pluralwort mit Singularbedeutung: Ein englischer announcer wird sagen, "Here is the news."

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reading in the book

du kannst sagen "I have read this in a book about ..."; idiomatisch richtig ist hier aber: "...reading a book"

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to read different kind of news or magazines at the same
time.

muss heißen: 1) different kinds of 2) besser magazine articles

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I prefer reading on my smart phone than in the book

die "Formel" für das, was du sagen willst, lautet:
to prefer doing s.th. to doing s.th else.
also: "I prefer reading on my smart phone to reading a book."

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Second(1) it is (2) comfortable to use in comparison with a book.

1)gewöhnlich wird die adverbiale Form "Secondly" verwendet. (2)hier fehlt "more"

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Nevertheless, a smart phone is more expensive than a book or newspaper

Dieser Satz als "Schlusssatz ist unmöglich; darüberhinaus hat er mit deinem eingangs gestellten Thema nichts zu tun.

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