Brauche bitte Hilfe für ein Essay über renewable energy :(

wie lautet die genaue aufgabenstellung?
was soll alles rein?
schonmal bei google oder wiki geguckt,
zwecks gliederung?

600 wörter sind doch zu schaffen, meine lk klausuren waren mit 900 wörter immer schon sehr kurz in englisch^^

Wow, dankeschön für die schnellen Antworten.

brabbit, ich werde mal deinem Rat folgen und die Fragen beantworten und übersetzen, sowie in eine Text zusammenfassen.
Mal schauen ob das was wird :(

Wäre vielleicht doch noch eine Person zu finden, die mir über ICQ helfen könnte ?

Liebe Grüße
Mandy

So haben es nun geschafft ;)

Wäre lieb, wenn ein paar von euch über den text schauen würden und mir sagen könnten was falsch ist bzw. wie ihr ihn findet.

Und bitte nicht so streng sein :)

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The text deals with the topic of renewable energy. Renewable energy is spread even further. More and more people who are off-the-grid use solar energy systems for their own gain.
Not only homes use renewable energy, but also many companies,too.
Easy to install Renewable energy, for example solar systems are easy to install and only require little maintenance. In many remote countries in the US who are off the grid, use solar panels on public telephones. Order to keep the phones up and running. It saves many kilometers wide digging of roads to lay cables. A Californian gas and electricity company has already made a step in the right direction. They supply about 150 homes with electricity from solar plants and saves a lot of money.
In addition, however, is the research is not over. Every day, the researchers try to find cheaper and better material for the production of solar panels.
Also, government could intervene to protect the environment, in the subject of renewable energies. The government might to increase taxes on fossil fuels ,to reducing the global warming. Also, they makes renewable energy more profitable for consumers.
According to experts, the hydrogen-based fuel cell systems have the best chance to prevail in the future. They are relatively cheap, renewable and environmentally friendly.

Renewable energy sources are becoming increasingly popular and are used more and more. Since the predictions made by scientists, the fossil fuels will be very exhausted for about 50 years. In addition, the convert from fossil fuels to renewable energy will protects the environment and in the future a lot of money.

There are many countries which a conversion to renewable energy even support with subsidies. In Germany you get for installing a solar systems a certain amount from the state, as support for this project.
By convert from fossil fuels to renewable energy, which still hold a few more fossil fuel reserves and global warming is slowed.

The energy industry in the US is facing a great future. More and more people are environmentally conscious and want to contribute to protecting the earth.
A good example comes from California, they serve about 150 homes with electricity by solar systems, and not by fossil fuels. The future will probably bring even more states or countries that use California as a good example and will also try to supply the homes with renewable energy.
Not only homes, also cars will probably run in the future with renewable energy. The first cars are already there , they will be operated with hydrogen-based fuel cell systems.
With government support, it could always be more.

Very few businesses or households have the money for the changeover. The Government would support any construction of renewable energy with a certain amount.
The best example we can just take the scrapping premiums ( Abwrackprämie ). People gets 2,000 euros from the state if they bought a new car and gave their old cars.
If there can organize something like that, we are for the future on the right path.

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Ganz liebe Grüße
Mandy