Bräuchte jm der meinen Text über renewable energy korrigiert

So viele Fehler,
dass mir keiner Helfen kann oder will ? :(

Mandy0688, du hast Recht, es sind in der Tat haufenweise Fehler in deinem Text; diese und die Länge des Textes schrecken etwas ab, denn so viel freie Zeit hat ja nicht jeder immer; dein Hauptproblem ist, dass du einen deutschen vorgeschriebenen Text übersetzt hast; dabei hast du all das, was du mal in der Sek.I über"word order" und "tenses" gelernt hast, nicht angewendet;

Ich verbessere den Text nach bestem Wissen und Gewissen, werde meine Änderungen aber nicht kennzeichnen, denn die BB-Codes sind hier sehr zeitaufwendig anzuwenden. Du musst also "meinen Text" mit deinem vergleichen.

The text deals with the topic of renewable energy. Renewable energy has spread further in the last few years.. More and more people who are off-the-grid use solar energy systems for their own gain.
Not only homes use renewable energy, but also many companies.
Renewable energy, for example solar systems, is easy to install and only requires little maintenance. Many remote states (oder meintest du "counties"=Landkreise?)in the US which are off the grid, use solar panels in order to keep public phones running. Many kilometres of digging up roads for the cables have been saved that way.. A Californian gas and electricity company has already made a step into the right direction. They supply about 150 homes with electricity from solar plants and thus save a lot of money.
In addition, however, the research is not over yet.. Every day, the researchers try to find cheaper and better materials for the production of solar panels.
The government also could intervene to protect the environment by promoting renewable energies. The government might increase taxes on fossil fuels to reduce the global warming. Also, they could make renewable energy more profitable for consumers.
According to experts, the hydrogen-based fuel cell systems have the best chance to prevail in future. They are relatively cheap, renewable and environmentally friendly.

Renewable energy sources have become increasingly popular and are more and more used, since predictions of scientistssay that fossil fuels will be exhausted in about 50 years. In addition, the conversion of fossil fuels to renewable energy will protect the environment and will save a lot of money in future.

There are many countries which support the conversion to renewable energy with subsidies. Germans, for example, get a certain amount of money from the state for installing solar systems.

By turning from fossil fuels to renewable energy the global warming will be slowed.

The energy industry in the US is facing a great future. More and more people have become environmentally conscious and want to contribute to protect the earth.
A good example comes from California: about 150 homes are powered by electricity from solar systems only. The future will probably convince even more states or countries to follow the Californian example ((((Anmerkung: du tendierst dazu, sehr redundant zu sein: du wiederholst dich z.T. innerhalb eines Satzes!))))
Not only homes, also cars will probably will run on renewable energy in the future. The first cars are already there , they will be operated with hydrogen-based fuel cell systems.
It could even be more if there were more support from the governments.

Very few businesses or households have the money for a changeover. The government should support any construction of renewable energy with a certain amount of money.
We can just take the scrapping premiums ( Abwrackprämie )in Germany as one good example. People have got 2,000 Euros from the state after they scrapped their od car and bought a new car instead.
If something like that could be organizted more often and on a broarder scale, we would be on the right path for the future

ha.lo.