Money: Bitte Text korrigieren

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Mein Text:
I am going to write a text about money.
Money is important to me because you can’t live without money.
Farther without money, I can`t buy food, live in a house, or buy clothes. Furthermore, money is a medium of exchange for goods and services and in our society, money stands for success, security and quality of life. Nowadays, a lot of people value money. Friendships and relationships are broken through money. If you have no money, you have fewer friends and worse clothes. The evaluation of people and situations is often linked to money.
I get the money from my parents and sometimes from my grandparents. I get my parents €50 pocket money every week. I am currently not working for my money. I want to start working as a salesperson on Saturday in three months because I will be 18 in three months and I want to earn my own pocket money. I give my money for clothes, make-up and school things. My parents pay for the rent and food.

Der Arbeitsauftrag hieß:
How important is money to you? Where do you get money from? Do you sometimes work for your money? What do you use the money for?