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Essay Advertising (200 Words)

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Würde mich freuen wenn ihr mal drüber lesen könntet und mich auf Fehler hinweisen könntet :)
Sollen nur 200 Wörter schreiben und hab schon bissl mehr also falls ihr sagt da kann was raus bitte mit sagen.
Dankeschön !

My thoughts about advertising
Anytime at one day we become confronted with commercials. While we eat, drive or relax - advertising is our follower where ever we go. Many of us didn’t realize the huge amount of advertisements which is used nowadays. And so there is also a huge amount of different opinions about it. But it is important to form your own opinion about the effect and use of advertising.
But let’s begin with the ones which can’t tell apart the pros and cons of advertisements – children – again and again there are arguments about the questions if companies should be allowed to advertise to children. Of course there are many commercials especially for kids anyway but the fact that our children are helplessly delivered to this manipulation is really scarifying. The advertising forms our children and their view on the world. It is a part of our life and the most companies aren’t able to stay without advertising. Basically it’s the task of commercials or brochures to make the product famous so people recognize it and buy it. But the most people dislike advertising especially commercials on the TV meanwhile they are watching a movie or a TV show because it is annoying that advertising interrupt it. Anyway the most advertisements aren’t really recognized, people just walk off some posters in the cities or advertisements while they are surfing on the internet but they didn’t look at them very accurate.
So advertising is our „ little friend” who is always by our side without our knowing. And everybody has to decide for themselves how much they fall under influence of the advertising.
Frage von Nil | am 27.03.2017 - 18:35


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 27.03.2017 - 21:59
Hier meine Korrektur und Kürzungen (sind noch ca. 215 Worte):

My thoughts about advertising
We are daily confronted (oder: faced) with commercials. While we eat,
drive or relax – they follow ( oder: track) us everywhere. Many of us don’t realize the huge amount of advertisements, which are used nowadays. And so there is a huge amount of different opinions about it. But it is important to make your own mind of the effect and use of advertising.
But let’s begin with the ones who can’t tell apart the pros and cons of advertisements – children. Again and again there are arguments about the questions if companies should be allowed to advertise for children. Of course there are many commercials especially for kids, but the fact that our children are helplessly manipulated by them is really scarifying.
Advertising affects our children and their view on the world.
Most companies can’t stay without advertising, because commercials or brochures have to make the product famous so people recognize and buy it. Many commercials are very annoying, when they interrupt a movie or a TV show.
Posters in the cities aren’t really recognized, people just pass them over. Internet users close advertisements without reading them, while they are surfing.
Advertising is our „little friend”, who is always by our side without our knowledge. Everybody has to decide for himself how much he may get influenced by advertising.


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Antwort von Nil | 28.03.2017 - 19:35
Vielen lieben Dank! :)

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