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Einleitung zum Thema:
We are start with the presentation about advertising.
I think you wonder at we chose this topic. I will tell you.
Advertising is widespread about the world and there are more than any other time.
Today it is a really important branch of business.
Advertisement meets us everywhere. At the television, radio, cinema or even on the internet.

Definition:
Advertising is bringing a product (or service) to the attention of potential and current customers. Advertising is focused on one particular product or service. Thus, an advertising plan for one product might be very different than that for another product. Advertising is typically done with signs, brochures, commercials, direct mailings or e-mail messages, personal contact, etc.

Einführung zu zwei Videos:
To compare the first movie with the second. The first is about the iPhone without famous people.
The second - it deals with a perfume. Into this commercial, Christina Aguilera promotes her new product. She’s a very celebrated personality.
Which from both video do you like and after you see that explain for what reason.