korrigieren: Text über Werbung

hallo,
ich habe einen Text geschrieben und
meine eigene meinung zur werbung geäußert.


I have decided to take the coke advertising
because it is very popular and it has remained
in my mind and that`s what makes good advertising.
This advertising speaks to the right target group.

Also if you don`t often drink coke you suddenly
remember the advertising. I think the right colours
got chosen and a good slogan:"Have a coke and a smile"
another slogan whichI like more is "open happiness".
The advertising wants to make good mood
and who doesn`t want this? This happens by the well chosen
colours and the good sound. The advertising is
manipulative but transparent.

vielen Dank für die verbesserung schon mal im voraus:)