My future plans

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Hello, today I would like to tell you something about my future plans:

First of all I want to finish the seconary school and hopefully get the qualification for the grammar school. During this time, when I`am about 18 or 19 years old, I would like to work part-time, because it is (nicht immer I find/want..) important to earn your own money and the pocket money is often not sufficient (anderes Wort für genug, da du im nachfolgenden Satz auch enough schreibst..).

If my grades are good enough, I would like to study economy, because I find it (really) interesting. When I was a kid , my dream was to become a doctor, and as the time passes by, dreams change (erscheinen). Sometimes I want to be a psychologist, a police, a teacher or other interesting jobs. Now I have grown up and realized what I want to be. I would like to be an office clerk, because I like it to use a computer and deal with paperwork. To earn a lot of money is not the most important aspect for me. I believe that a job should be like a hobby. I want to love my work. Before I raise a family (Familie gründen), I would like to travel overseas. I want to see other countries and cities like Los Angeles, Italien or Duba.

Versuche deine Sätze/Satzstruktur unterschiedlich zu machen. Immer mit "I", oder "I want" anzufangen ist unschön. Wechsel hin-und her, benutze verschiedene "connectives", füge auch mal 2 Sätze zusammen etc. Versuch viel zu schreiben, dadurch kommt die Übung..