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My road ahead / My roadmap

Frage: My road ahead / My roadmap
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Hallo,
könntet Ihr vielleicht kurz über mein Road Ahead rüberlesen (kontrollieren)?
Ich würde mich sehr freuen.
Vielen Dank im Voraus ;)

 
Myroad ahead


Introduction:

Iintend to present Myroad ahead.


Weshould produce a poster about our dreams and plans in the future. Onthis poster (zeigen auf poster) you can see my dreams and plans forthe future. I have drawn a clock, that will show my steps in form oftimesteps of my life.


Clearlystate where you see yourself in 10- 20 Years:

I take the view that in 10-20 Years I have my own veterinary practice,because that is one of my biggest dreams and plans of my life.


MainBody:

Firstoff all I will take Abitur with a very good qualification, becausewhen I wont to study, I must have a really good qualification to betaken on a University. Secondly I want to study medicine on aUniversity, because after that I will work as a veterinary. Duringthe time on University, I want to become acquainted with new peopleand I want to meet my next boyfriend.

Besidesthat I will pass exams on University and get qualification. After my qualificaition on University, I want to work hard in a veterinary practice for 3 or 4 Years, because I must make much of money to live and I wont to acquire experience so in the future I can open my own veterinary practice.

A really important plan is, that I will marry my hospend so everyonecan see , that we are a little family. At once we want to start tobuild our House. There are a number of reasons why we want to bulid ahouse. One of the reason is, that we wont have kids and a little flat is to small for 3 or 4 people.

Another goal is, that I will open my own veterinary pracitice, because it is one of my biggest dreams. I want to work independently to show, that I am a independent women and I can manage my life on my own.

After some years I want to have kids, because it is wonderful to have a little family.

Last but not least, I want to be getting old and to have a wonderfull time with my family and to enjoy every day of my life.


Conclusion:

In conclusion, I would like to say that the most important goal of my life is, that I have a wonderfull time with my family and to enjoy every day of my life,because a day on that you don´t smile is a wasted day.
Frage von Flowerdreamflo (ehem. Mitglied) | am 05.02.2015 - 15:38


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 05.02.2015 - 18:46
Hallo Flowerdreamflo, ich habe da einiges gefunden und es mal korrigiert:

My road ahead => besser: roadmap    
Introduction
I would like to present my roadmapto you.
We were expected to/ were supposed to/were told to  produce a poster showing our dreams and plans for the future. This is my perfoemance (auf das Poster zeigen). I have drawn a clock,  which will show my steps in form of timesteps of my life.     
Clearly state where you seeyourself in 10- 20 years:
I consider that I will have my own veterinary practice in 10-20 years, because this is one of my biggest dreams and plans of my life.
Main Body => besser: Principal Part:
First off all I will take my A levels with a very good qualification, because if I want to study, I must have a real good qualification to be accepted at a University. Secondly I want to study veterinary medicine at a University, because after that I want to  work as a veterinary. During the time at the University, I want to become acquainted (zu umständlich; besser: I want to get to know new people )with new p   eople and to meet my next boyfriend.  Besides that I will pass exams at  the University and get qualifications . After my qualificaition at the University, I would like to work hard in a veterinary practice for 3 or 4 years to  collect experience, and additionally I must make ( earn ) much money for living and to be able to set up my own veterinary p ractice in the future.     A really important plan is, that I will marry my friend (husband ist ja schon Ehemann… oder willst Du ihn 2x heiraten?) so everyone can see, that we are a little family. At once (besser: Afterwards /danach) we want to start building our house . There are a number of reasons why we want to do so. One of them is, that we plan to have kids and a little flat is too small for 3 or 4 people.    
Another aim (goal = im Sport) is, to open my own veterinary pracitice, because it is one of my biggest dreams. I want to work independently in order  to show, that I am a  self-supporting  woman who is able to  manage her  own life. After some years I want to have kids, because it is wonderful to have a little family.      Conclusion : 
Last but not least, in conclusion, I would like to say that the most important aim of my life is that I wish getting old, having a wonderful time with my family and enjoy every day of my life, because I am convinced, that a day without a smile is awasted day. 


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Antwort von Flowerdreamflo (ehem. Mitglied) | 05.02.2015 - 22:03
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