My road ahead / My roadmap
Frage: My road ahead / My roadmap(2 Antworten)
Hallo, könntet Ihr vielleicht kurz über mein Road Ahead rüberlesen (kontrollieren)? Ich würde mich sehr freuen. Vielen Dank im Voraus ;) Myroad ahead Introduction: Iintend to present Myroad ahead. Weshould produce a poster about our dreams and plans in the future. Onthis poster (zeigen auf poster) you can see my dreams and plans forthe future. I have drawn a clock, that will show my steps in form oftimesteps of my life. Clearlystate where you see yourself in 10- 20 Years: I take the view that in 10-20 Years I have my own veterinary practice,because that is one of my biggest dreams and plans of my life. MainBody: Firstoff all I will take Abitur with a very good qualification, becausewhen I wont to study, I must have a really good qualification to betaken on a University. Secondly I want to study medicine on aUniversity, because after that I will work as a veterinary. Duringthe time on University, I want to become acquainted with new peopleand I want to meet my next boyfriend. Besidesthat I will pass exams on University and get qualification. After my qualificaition on University, I want to work hard in a veterinary practice for 3 or 4 Years, because I must make much of money to live and I wont to acquire experience so in the future I can open my own veterinary practice. A really important plan is, that I will marry my hospend so everyonecan see , that we are a little family. At once we want to start tobuild our House. There are a number of reasons why we want to bulid ahouse. One of the reason is, that we wont have kids and a little flat is to small for 3 or 4 people. Another goal is, that I will open my own veterinary pracitice, because it is one of my biggest dreams. I want to work independently to show, that I am a independent women and I can manage my life on my own. After some years I want to have kids, because it is wonderful to have a little family. Last but not least, I want to be getting old and to have a wonderfull time with my family and to enjoy every day of my life. Conclusion: In conclusion, I would like to say that the most important goal of my life is, that I have a wonderfull time with my family and to enjoy every day of my life,because a day on that you don´t smile is a wasted day. |
Frage von Flowerdreamflo (ehem. Mitglied) | am 05.02.2015 - 15:38 |
Antwort von Ratgeber | 05.02.2015 - 18:46 |
Hallo Flowerdreamflo, ich habe da einiges gefunden und es mal korrigiert: My road ahead => besser: roadmap Introduction : I would like to present my roadmapto you. Clearly state where you seeyourself in 10- 20 years: I consider that I will have my own veterinary practice in 10-20 years, because this is one of my biggest dreams and plans of my life. Main Body => besser: Principal Part: First off all I will take my A levels with a very good qualification, because if I want to study, I must have a real good qualification to be accepted at a University. Secondly I want to study veterinary medicine at a University, because after that I want to work as a veterinary. During the time at the University, I want to become acquainted (zu umständlich; besser: I want to get to know new people ) Another aim (goal = im Sport) is, to open my own veterinary pracitice, because it is one of my biggest dreams. I want to work independently in order to show, that I am a self-supporting woman who is able to manage her own life. After some years I want to have kids, because it is wonderful to have a little family. Conclusion : Last but not least, in conclusion, I would like to say that the most important aim of my life is that I wish getting old, having a wonderful time with my family and enjoy every day of my life, because I am convinced, that a day without a smile is awasted day. |
Antwort von Flowerdreamflo (ehem. Mitglied) | 05.02.2015 - 22:03 |
Vielen Dank |
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