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Comment on online shopping

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Ich musste für die Schule einen Kommentar (bzw. eine Erörterung) zum Thema `Online Shopping` schreiben. Ich würde mich freuen, wenn jemand mal drüber gucken könnte und mir feedback und tipps geben könnte!



[i]Danke schonmal im Voraus :))

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It is often been said that online shopping is bad. That is the reason why in the following I shall deal with the problems of online shopping. There are negative but also positive arguments that I would like to present to you.

I will start to list the negative ones.

One problem of online shopping is that the websites could be faked and you could lose a lot of money. Another problem are the expensive shipping costs and the biggest problem is that there is no chance to try the clothes or shoes on.

Now that I presented you the negative points, I will give you the positive ones.

Some advantages of online shopping are the big choice of products, there are no big crowds and you do not need to drive to the store. This makes it less stressful. The websites also often have sales and discounts, so you can save a lot of money and buy more clothes.

Looking at all the positive and negative arguments I am concluding that online shopping has definitely more advantages than disadvantages. It is just easier and really time- saving.
Frage von elen121 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 13.03.2016 - 17:27


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Antwort von LsD | 13.03.2016 - 18:21
It is often been said that online shopping is bad. That is the reason why in the following I shall deal with the problems of online shopping. There are negative but also positive arguments that I would like to present to you.

I will start to list the negative ones.

One problem of online shopping is that the websites could be faked and you could lose a lot of money. Another problem are the expensive shipping costs and the biggest problem is that there is no chance to try the clothes or shoes on before you buy them.

Now that I presented you the negative points,
I will give you the positive ones.

Some advantages of online shopping are the big choice of products, there are no big crowds and you do not need to drive to the store. This makes it less stressful. The websites also often have sales and discounts, so you can save a lot of money and buy more clothes.

Looking at all the positive and negative arguments I am concluding that online shopping has definitely more advantages than disadvantages. It is just easier and really time- saving.

--> Sonst aus meiner Sicht keine Fehler
--> Inhaltlich sehr kurz und oberflächlich.. da ist die Frage, ob du noch etwas mehr Argumente auslisten möchtest (z.B. das Aussterben kleiner Läden in den Innenstädten, ..)
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