Comment on online shopping

It is often been said that online shopping is bad. That is the reason why in the following I shall deal with the problems of online shopping. There are negative but also positive arguments that I would like to present to you.

I will start to list the negative ones.

One problem of online shopping is that the websites could be faked and you could lose a lot of money. Another problem are the expensive shipping costs and the biggest problem is that there is no chance to try the clothes or shoes on before you buy them.

Now that I presented you the negative points,
I will give you the positive ones.

Some advantages of online shopping are the big choice of products, there are no big crowds and you do not need to drive to the store. This makes it less stressful. The websites also often have sales and discounts, so you can save a lot of money and buy more clothes.

Looking at all the positive and negative arguments I am concluding that online shopping has definitely more advantages than disadvantages. It is just easier and really time- saving.

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