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Wäre nett wenn ihr euch den text ansehen würdet.
Dankeschön im vorraus.


Topshop, H&M, Amazon, and Accessorize & Pearl, all these great companies can be found on the Internet, this made me write a text about Internet-Shopping based on the statement: “The internet is just a quick and convenient way of going shopping.”

I really love online-shopping, it´s really a great way when you want to buy things you can´t get in Austria, but I am a little bit skeptical about the credit-card security.

Imagine, you are ordering a parcel from an online-shop in Great-Britain, like always you are paying with your credit card.
A few days later you check your bank-account –KABOOM- there is nothing left.
What are you doing now?

When I think about it this is really the worst case and to be honest nothing like this ever happened to me, but it can happen.
Now I´d like to talk about the positive aspects. Internet-shopping is a cool thing, on Sunday at Midnight you can order a few things or when you are too lazy to go to the pharmacy, there is sure an Online-Shop. Surely the world wouldn´t be the same without the “Net”, you can say it´s the most important invention in the 21th Century.

All in all I love Online-Shopping but it´s way better to go in a Shopping-Center with a friend, it´s a great fun and you get out of your house.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 19.01.2010 - 18:34

 
Antwort von GAST | 19.01.2010 - 18:44
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mir keiner kurz den text durchsehen?


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Antwort von Wiish (ehem. Mitglied) | 19.01.2010 - 18:49
Willst du den schriftlich abgeben oder mündlich vortragen?
Wenn du es schriftlich machst solltest du die Shortforms rausnehmen;
-"it´s really a great way when you want to buy things you can´t get in Austria, but I am " -> on the one hand it is...on the other hand I am..; so hast du einen schöneren Übergang
-happened to me, but it can happen. -> der Schönheit wegen, kannst du vielleicht schreiben...but it is possible.

Ansonsten finde ich den Text sehr locker zu lesen :D Aber ich weiß nicht, ob du so schreiben kannst mit dem `KABOOM` zum Beispiel, weil es sehr unförmlich ist.

 
Antwort von GAST | 19.01.2010 - 18:57
Danke erstmal, will ich eigentlich schriftlich abgeben, hab mir auch schon gedacht das der Text ein bisschen unförmig ist... besonders das mit dem KABOOM.... hab nur Angst das es ohne das nicht mehr "wirkt"

Danke noch mal für die Übergänge *gg*


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Antwort von Timea | 19.01.2010 - 19:09
I really love online-shopping, IT IS really a great way IF you want to buy things you CANNOT get in Austria, but I am a little bit SCEPTICAL about credit-card security.

Imagine, you are ordering a parcel from an online-shop in Great-Britain and like always you pay with your credit card. A few days later you check your bank-account and to you utter horror there is nothing left!
What would you do in such a situation?

When I think about it this is really the worst case and to be honest nothing like this ever happened to me, but (wie schon vorgeschlagen wurde, würd ich auch eher "it is possible" verwenden.

Furthermore the positive aspects clearly outweigh (überwiegen) this danger: Internet-shopping is a practical thing because even on Sunday at midnight you can order a few things or IF you are too lazy to go to the pharmacy, there is sureLY an online-Shop. Obviously the world would not be the same without the “Net”, you can say it is the most important invention OF the 21th century.

All in all, I enjoy online-Shopping but it is even better to go in a shopping-Center with a friend: we have great fun and get out of the house.


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Antwort von Timea | 19.01.2010 - 19:10
ah, hab ich ja fast übersehen:

When I think about it this is really the worst case and to be honest nothing like this HAS ever happened to me...

dies wären meine Verbesserungsvorschläge. ;)

LG,
Timea

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