London: Brief kontrollieren, bitte

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Kontrolliert bitte auch ob ich alle Inhaltspunkte drinnen habe:
- where ou are staying
- the weather
- the sights you have already visited (3(
- some facts of these sights
- the things you like in London + why
- your plans for tomorrow (2)
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Dear Sarah,
I have been in London for three days now and the weather has always been sunny. I am standing at a nice hotel with great food in north London.
I have already visited London Eye, Tower Bridge and Madame Tussaud’s who is a very famous waxwork museum. You can see lifelike wax figures of many famous people. London Eye is a huge wheel. If you go on it you have a wonderful view of the city. And Tower bridge was built 1894 and is one of the most beautiful bridges in the world.
I like the shopping in London because, there are some good shopping streets for example Oxford Street. And I like the much famous buildings, because they are interesting.
I’m going to see Buckingham palace and at the evening I’m going to watch a movie at a huge London cinema tomorrow.
See you soon, Clara