Korrekturlesen - Writing Assignments 1

Sooo dann versuch ich mich mal;)


My name ist M. K. and I am 18 years old. I was born in Braunschweig and I am originally from Germany. Since my childhood I love to play football. Because oft he importance of my last school years,
I decided to make a break in my football life.  (Besser: ...I decided to stop playing football for a while.)

I went to the primary school „ Grundschule D.“ between 2000-2004. After that, I went to the high school „Gymnasium K.B. “in B. to get my high school graduation. 

In my first school years I met a biochemistry teacher who changed my whole life. Conseqently I love the topics biology, chemistry and math since my early school years. This first experiences in science motivated me to participate in „life science“ competitions for several times. 

And now I am studying „Biotechnology“ at the university „TU B.“. My course of study connects the topics biology, chemistry and math. Therefore my student life is very varied. For me, it is makes fun to work with bacteria in the laboratory and try to produce certain ingredients by using the metabolism of some organisms. 

But in comparison to the school life, you must invest much more time to be succesful at the university. (Ehrlich? Ich finds ziemlich entspannt:D) At the other side, you have more personal responsibility and you can organize your time according to your interests. This variability allows you to spend time with your family and your friends. 

I am a very diligent student and I am working a lot to get good marks. Therefore I also (ohne das "also" find ich die Formulierung schöner, kommt ja danach nochmal vor, das reicht) need time to relax and also time to spend with my family. It would be much more difficult for me to study [apart of my family]. (Würde ich nicht so formulieren... vllt "far away from my hometown"?) Then I would have to do my own housework [household?], which would take much more of my valuable time. 




Ich hoffe das hilft dir erstmal:) Falls du das digital abgeben muss, schau unbedingt! auf die Leerzeichen, oft hast du den ersten Buchstaben des nächsten Wortes noch am vorigen Wort dranklatschen. Aber du wolltest es sicher nur schnell abtippen, hab es trotzdemim Text gleich mit geändert:)

Liebe Grüße, Wolfheart