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Already as a little child music was very important for me since I have grown up with different kinds of music, namely nursery rhymes, modern songs, and also classical music, church music, musicals, symphonies and opera music, thanks to my parents.
My parents have often taken me in operas and fairs since they played a part there themselves why I wanted to join in in the symphony orchestra and in choirs con-singing already with five years.



I have enjoyed this much until my twelfth birthday.
I have loved Mozart, Schubert and Haydn, however, listened to also contemporary music. With 5 years I have begun to take peoples song lessons with Judith Janzen and Elke which brought me much further and has enjoyed me much.
With seven years I have gone to Stuttgart every weekend to make a musical education. I danced musical dance and modern dance there and took special song hours.
A couple of years later, the reversal then came because I wanted hiphop with my best friend umbedingt into this. I have stopped the song at that time and went in dancing. My favorite artists were then suddenly E40, 50 cents and Ludacris, because they were `cool`. This phase then went 4 years until I have come to the cathedral music Speyer with 16 years. I have got to like the classic and church music there again. Since 2010, I have song lessons with Markus Melchiori and since 2012 also at Alexander Lauer and Stefanie Fels-Lauer which prepare for different song examinations.
In the past, it was rather difficult for me to talk about my music since many have made fun of it but I don`t care today.
I have mixed the different styles today. I furthermore dance hiphop and lyricl hiphop, sing in the cathedral choir, chamber choir and country youth choir and conduct my own children`s choir, play in the Staatsphilarmonie Rhine country palace and in the youth symphony orchestra.
My favorite artists haven`t changed within 10 years because particularly Haydn and Schubert have delivered unbelievable works.
I all in all think that all music directions have what for himself and one can mix her also terrifically.
Everybody shall not her decide in favor of himself, be able to and sometime only still so speak, in the late life advance which music he likes to hear and not go after that what runs in the charts because at many songs I am surprised why in the charts am these since himself the texts are often rather vulgar and non-conformist for children and teenagers and they influence themselves of this fast what becomes.
This cannot be because music shall be a little what arranges to be free the soul and beautiful thoughts or memories brings to one and one also challenges if one learns a new instrument for example.
There is no favorite music for me. For me it is important that the music doesn`t only sound beautiful but a message also takes with this one I can have a good look.
This is music for me.