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Important facts:
Vöslauer is the most popular mineral water in Austria, it is available in all sizes, varieties and natural flavors.
The company Vöslauer was founded in 1936 by Central Savings Bank.
The seat of Vöslauer is in Bad Vöslau.
Alfred Hudler is a management of Vöslauer. He controlled the marketing, sales and finance department.
Herbert Schlossnikl is also a management of Vöslauer. He controlled the production and engineering .
In Vöslauer works 170 employees. In 2010 have a Vöslauer 88.3 Millionen ¤ sales.

History
In 1996 the PET bottle was introduced. In April 2003 there is no refilling of bottles of mineral water, a plastic deposit bottle was instead placed on the market, but not refilled, but is recycled.

Kinds of Vöslauer:
There are many kinds of Vöslauer. First of all the Vöslauer in many sort for example prickling, mild and great prickling.
Then it is given also in balance. The sort of balance are: Apple-Cranberry,Strawberry-Pepper, Lemon, Mango-Orangen, Red Grap, Watermelon and Lemon-Ingwer. The last of sort is a bio. There are 2 sort. It is Holunderblüte and Lemon.

Healthy effects of Vöslauer:
The advantages of drinking mineral water is that if the tap water which is supplied to your home is either contaminated, contains harmful substances, or just does not have the minerals in the concentration that your body needs, mineral water is a great way to supplement for what you are not getting either from your diet, or your drinking water.
Mineral water, which is bottled, is also is free of contaminants.
Aside from the higher mineral concentration, which can be as much as four times greater than tap water, there are no harmful additives that you don’t know about.
Mineral water supplementation may be the best way to replace what is lost.

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