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... they heard some dogs barking. [---]Fear rose in them.

Flashback
"Dylan please, let’s go."
"Oh come on Lauren, don`t be such a spoilsport, like always."
"Dylan you know I’m just someone who wants to be on the safe side of life."
"Safe side of life ... hahaha ... , you have to take some risks to have fun in your life."
"But breaking into a swimming pool is punishable."
"Just forget your guilty conscience and live for the moment. Please, they will not notice us."
"Hopefully."
Flashback end

"Laurenyou have to run faster. Otherwise they will get us soon". Exactly at this moment Lauren stumbled and fell. Dylan realized that quickly und run back to her to help her get up. The couple looked back and saw two cops with a dog and the angry caretaker of the swimming pool coming up to them. Dylan imagined which consequences their behaviour could have and shortly after that he got a guilty conscience because he had persuaded Lauren to come up with him. "Me and my silly ideas", he muttered to himself. "Stop crying and run", Lauren said.said Lauren. Yeah, you`re right, Lauren, we have almost reached the car". The couple did not realize that with Lauren`s fall, her purse had fallen out of her small bag. They ran down the street and while [---] running Dylan took the key from his trouser pocket. When they reached the car Dylan opened it and Lauren looked back and realized that no one followed them anymore. "I think they lost us or we were faster than them" Dylan also looked back and realized the same "You see Lauren, you can just have fun if you are ready to take risks." "Oh shut up Dylan and get into the car. We only had a bit of luck which
has not happenedvery often lately."
While the two young people were getting into the car, 500 meters away from them the three followers found Lauren`s purse and opened it. On various credit cards Lauren`s address was written. The three decided to visit her in the evening.
"As I said Lauren you are a spoilsport." "Dylan if you say that again I get out the car and walk home." "Spoilsport, spoilsport." said Dylan to annoy his girlfriend. Lauren flushed and tensed. She opened the car and while trying to get out she said to Dylan. "You want it that way Dylan you`re like a child and your decisions will someday bring you in a bad situation from which you will no longer get out so easily. Remember my words Dylan, you are no longer a child. You have to take responsibility for your behavior." Dylan winced and answered her. "I know Lauren. You`re right like always. I`m sorry. Please forgive me. I will never bring us in such a situation again. I`m really sorry." "If you are really sorry why are you playing cool. Sometimes I cannot understand you. But you know I cannot be angry with you for a long time. Apology granted, let us go. We still have to buy some things in the supermarket for dinner." They drove off [---]to arrive before closing time.