Personenbeschreibung bitte kontrollieren

Hallo ihr lieben,
es wäre echt super nett, wenn jemand der fit in Englisch ist, meinen Text uberfliegen könnte und mich auf mögliche Fehler hinweisen würde bzw.
diese korriegieren könnte:)

The person who I`m going to tell you took the name Ursula. She was my favourite-resident in the nursing home. Ursula was with her 82 years a very pretty women.
She has wonderful almond-shaped eyes an shoulder length black colored hair. She was not particular high but slim. No matter if it was cold or warm, Ursula loves to be in the fresh air. She was very sociable and talkative, to that very intelligent and realistic. The most worry for Ursula was her children. She has three sons but no one came to visit her. She told me daily about about them and she has to cry often. I tryed to comfort her and embraces her. She was very grateful about that. I miss Ursula very much. But the thought that she is now at a place where neither gives pain nor suffering, comfort me a lot.

Ich bin euch für eure Hilfe SEHR dankbar, ich weiss ich bin nicht die Beste in Englich also bitte lacht mich nicht aus.