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Gandhis methods and principles of non-violence

For Ghandi non-violence wasn´t just a kind of passive resistance.
He saw it as a principle which claims victims, but it makes weaker people to the strongest ones.
In his opinion non-violence was the only possibility to achieve peace between all folks and races.
Without any forces he fought for the independence of India, which was occupied by the british at that time.
For instance, he organised a national strike. The outcome was, that nothing worked anymore. There drove no trains or buses, no stores were open and, which was most important, the telegraphs didn´t run. The british couldn´t contact people in their home country and became anxious. With this, Gandhi calls attention to the press all over the world.
Another time, he requested the people at an event to burn all clothes which came from Great Britian. It was a huge fire and the whole world gazed at it.
Many of the indian industries for clothes got bankrupt, because of the import of clothes by the British. Because of that, many people in India became out of work.
When he got back to london to discuss the independence of india, he visited the factory worker who fabricated the clothes.
Many of them became out of work because of the indian boycott.
But they understood Gandhi and liked him. He explained, that an unemployed person in India gets nothing, whereas british people get subsidies.
The worker liked the fact, that Gandhi visited them to explain his thoughts and aims.
In addition to this, it was something which they missed on their own politicians.

Another great appeal was, that he asked a group of Indians for burning their british passports, because they didn´t have the rights of the british.
He collected the passports of the people and threw them into the fire.
During that a policeman battered him, but he went on as long he was able to.
With this he hit the headlines and engaged peoples sympathy for it.

Probably the most spectacular action was the famous salt march in 1930. Gandhi proposed a non-violent march protesting the British Salt Tax. The Salt Tax essentially made it illegal to sell or produce salt, allowing a complete British monopoly. Since salt is necessary in everyone`s daily diet, everyone in India was affected. The Salt Tax made it illegal for workers to freely collect their own salt from the coasts of India, making them buy salt they couldn`t really afford.
The British post british soldiers in front of the salt works.
The Indians went up to them in little groups and the soldiers knocked them down with their clubs. Nobody struggled. They didn´t do anything.
The Indians found international favour and the British didn´t know what to do. How should they have fought against a non-violent but strong enemy?
For that purpose and because the British were weak from the second world war, India became independent in 1947.
When the hindus and moslems began to fight, Gandhi started to fast. He wanted to fast until the battles end. On the verge of his death the battles found an ending and he began to eat again.
Because of this methods of non-violence, Gandhi achieved more than any attack or war.

„There is no way to peace, peace is the way!“
Mahatma Gandhi