Brief kontrollieren bitte

Könnt ihr bitte meinen Brief kontrollieren. Wäre ein Notfall. Müsste es bis morgen früh haben. Vielen Dank Im Voraus:)


Dear father,
You know me well as I am your daughter. You know well my likings and you also know that my only choice is to be free and I would do everything for that.
I am only 18 years old and have so many plans about my future. How are you willing to get marry your only daughter to a 30 years old man. I am driving crazy every time when I came across with this reality. My father who was always on my side who supported my for everything I did and do is now the person who is putting the biggest spoke in my wheel.
Honestly, I have no words to describe how I’m feeling. You refuse to eat and drink because I don’t want to marry him and you also use Gandhi’s name. But I want to stress that He would never do this to his daughter like you. He supported women and did not try to forced marriage them. What will be your explanation to Gandhi in your next life if he asks you about this bad action? I am so disappointed and I am sure that Gandhi is also disappointed in you. Another important aspect is the fact that you abuses mom.
If you don’t stop you bad actions against my mom I would no see you as my father anymore and believe me I would do everything to free my mother.
I hope you will see you mistakes and will try to make them good. Because one of my greatest wishes would be to be Aleykümselam a family again.
I love you dad.
Take care.
Yours,
Jamila