Bitte meinen englisch Aufsatz korrigieren!

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mir keiner helfen ? :(

Na dann warte ich noch ein bisschen und hoffe dass heute noch einer drüberschauen kann.

Ich habe einmal die Rechtschreibung korrigiert, aber nur die Rechtschreibung!

Everyone knows that Automation brings big problems. Nevertheless, the automation of many companies is already widespread. In the big companies can be found almost exclusively automated processes. The trend is showing us that more and more companies are likely to jump on this train. So there must be some reasons why so many companies to switch to automate their work flows.

A not unimportant argument is the fact that it is flexible in terms of production. If any current production coming requests for smaller productions that bring but much more revenue. Could we stop for a short time, the ongoing production and insert one at that. For example, in metal stamping factories imagine it is. The work is long gone and replaced by hand-operated automated processes. So you could stop a production with a button and insert a new production to increase sales.

Even more significant is the reason that it is increasing at an automation competitiveness against other countries. It is therefore not only dependent on the national market but can also explore the international market. It will be open by several new markets for the company. This naturally brings not only short but also brings a greater turnover international customers. Also being improved through the international work, the image of the company.

The main argument is that we can offer through automation products much cheaper than the companies do not rely on automation. Through automation, work flows are no longer carried out by people by hand but run by machines. This also has a second advantage. One machine can work much more accurate, faster and cleaner than a man. As a good example of the auto industry is moving forward. Earlier workers have every single item in a car built by hand. This was very time consuming and, above all, were not ruled errors. Often it seemed that had buttons are not where they should be. A machine makes this activity today automatically, without errors. One machine costs only once a certain purchase amount, and then fall only to the maintenance costs and electricity costs. On the contrary, a worker, it costs a lot of monthly salary or commission and may be sick more often times and can hardly be replaced.

A rather serious argument against the automation products are without character. In the past such as plates were still done by hand. They had therefore a unique product. It was somewhat expensive, but hold something special. Today, plates are machine-made, they have no special value. There is a kind of dish a million times in the world.

The main argument against the automation is, however, the increase in unemployment. People get dismissed as machines take over their work. The number of unemployed increased from year to year, as more and more companies come up with this idea of switching to automation.

The automation is not the best solution. It will put too many people on the street. Workers are unemployed and can hardly keep himself above water let alone support a family with a child. There should be a social solution to this problem.
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