Essay reconstructive and cosmetic surgery. Bitte lesen :)

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When people hear the words ‘plastic surgery’, they tend to think of cosmetic surgery and associate it primarily with ageing hollywood actresses who wanted to look younger or of all the prominent figures which have silicone implants and rhinoplasties.

But why don’t they think about reconstructive surgery? A surgery which reconstruct physical form and function after birth defects, accidents and diseases.
In this essay i will tell you something about reconstructive and cosmetic surgery and it’s results and problems.

Reconstructive surgery is done to make someone look normal or to improve function. Tumors, skin cancer, cleft-lip,extra fingers/toes, burn wounds are all examples of why you might have reconstructive surgery done.

Cosmetic surgery is only used to enhance the body’s appearance. Many people think of cosmetic surgery as a quick fix to their problems. Some examples of cosmetic surgery are for example face lifts, nose jobs, breast enhancement and liposuctions.
But in some cases cosmetic surgery would actually be a form of reconstructive surgery, for example a child with a cleft lip might have surgery done to make the lip connect and look normal. It would be hard for this child growing up with something about himself that it do not like. And on covers of practically every magazine he could see physically fit and beautiful male and female models. That sends the message to viewers; “THIS is beautiful. “

We live in a society where everyone is practically judged by image. Girls want to have the body like Britney Spears and the guys want the body of Brad Pitt because in the eyes of the general public to be “beautiful” you have to look like them.

The result of this is that people with deformity could be social exclude and have low self-esteem.
So this people would turn to plastic surgery to change the person which they see in the mirror every morning.

Finally I vote for plastic or cosmetic surgery if it’s necessary for the self-esteem or physical functions because some kinds of deformations have a reject effect and that could lead to social exclusion or self-esteem problems.

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