Creative writing...

ja mir scheint es auch so als ob du ein familienausflug (einen erlebten oder ausgedachten) schreiben sollst ...
der geschichte halt eine überschrift geben und fertig ...
aber mit: "and at least two aub-headings" kann ich leider nichts anfangen ...
sry ...

Last summer my family and i .... werd creativ :)

The holiday of last summer was a holiday with a lot of action and adventures..First we didnŽt know what to do. Than my father had a very good idea: Lets make a trip through (beliebige stadt).

Dannach erklärst du etwas über die autofahrt und...
Suddenly my father got red and he said: Hey, dont make panic. But I dont know where we are..
We were in the middle of a forest..at NIGHT..

hat denn jemand villeicht ne idee ode rne hilfestellung für mich? Ist echt dringend, denn es wird nämlich zensiert...

when we visit my grandmother in xy, we went in the zoo oder so was ka.....

mitm zoo kann man viel anfangen^^ mit den ganzen tieren und so xD ....

ich glaub`, wir haben mal so was gemacht, moment - ich gucke mal nach.......
so, also, leider nichts gefunden. mit " at least two aub-headings!" kann ich leider auch nichts anfangen, überschrift ist klar.
Bsp.: Last summer we were in Scotland and there was a really wonderful nature. When we arrived there we couldn`t know, what we will find there. But when I`m thinking back, I could say, it was the best holiday ever `cause I meeted my best friend in Scotland. When my family and I arrived, we couldn`t findthe hotel first, but three hours later my dad asked a tall and friendly boy and really, he could help us. When we were at the hotel I was really happy when Joe asked me to meet him again. And this was the beginning of a wonderful friendship. -> weiß jetŽzt nicht, ob das in die Richtung gehen soll oder ob du eher, Naturbeschreibung und so was machen sollst. Ich empfehle dir auf jeden Fall, nicht unbedingt was Fiktives zu nehmen, weil das schwerer ist. Und ich hoffe, dass ich wenigstens einen Anreiz schaffen konnte. ;-)

last summer i visited my relatives in ..... for 3 weeks. the weather was great and we went to the beach almost every day. of course we went to the famous museum there, too. That was very interessting. But then my sister broke her leg and had to lie in bed all day. that wasn`t very good. on thy way home we stopped by at my grandmothers house in.....! We spent 2 days there and had lots of fun, eventhough my grandmother is almost blind. All in all it was a nice holiday with lots of fun!
soo, bitte. das war ausgedacht