Creative Writing/Reported Missing by Barry Cole

Hallo,


kann mir bitte jemand den folgenden Text auf Fehrler korrigiere,ich weiß dass ich in Englisch noch nicht so gut bin!
Aufgabe war: Imagine you are the policeman.Write his police report.


In the afternoon a very old women came to the policestation,she was very strange and nervous.
She smells like Alchohol.Very strong.
She wanted to know if she right here in the night club.
The policemann must be scared loudly and look at the women very surprised and a little bit confused.
She said that she is in the autumn of her life and now she will enyoing therest of her life.
The policemann said that he see strenght and wisdom in her emerald eyes and she had a proud carriage.
He said thats him never happened before!
He was very impressed about the strange and crazy entrance of a so old women,that he suddenly decided to let someone go and determine to go with the women and to celebrite with her all night long.