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Wär lieb wenn jemand den Vortrag Korrekturlesen könnte, sind sicher einige Fehler drin!

Schonmal danke im vorraus, Steffi

David Schwimmer


·David Schwimmer was born on November 12, 1966 in Queens, New York
·he raised in Los Angeles
·David is a Jewish
·his parents Arthur and Arlene are lawyers and married in 1964
·his sister Ellie was born in 1965
·Schwimmer was first exposed acting when he enrolled in a high-school drama class on a whim
·after he completed the courseà an instructor encouraged him to attend a summer program in acting at Northwestern University in Chicago
·after his graduation from high schoolà he returned to Northwesternà there he received a bachelor´s degree in speech/theater.
·following his graduation in 1988à Schwimmer founded the Lookingglass Theater Company in Chicago (along with seven other Northwestern graduates)
·the group is an ensemble of actors, directors, and writers
·Schwimmer`s stage-acting credits with Lookingglass include "West," "The Odyssey," Of One Blood," "In the Eye of the Beholder" and "The Master and Margarita."
·his stage-directing credits include "The Jungle," which earned six Joseph Awards; "The Serpent"; and "Alice in Wonderland," which was performed at the Edinburgh Festival in Scotland
·in 1993, Schwimmer made his debut as a television-series regular on the comedy "Monty."
·he had recurring roles in a few other TV series for example Montreal`s "13th Annual Just For Laughs Festival."
·his favourite food are Bagels and pizza
·David likes Oldies, classical music and unknown punk and rock bands
·he loves playing softball, basketball or ping pong
·he is best known for his role as Ross Geller in the sitcom Friends


Ross Geller

·the three time divorced paleontologist Ross Geller
·Ross Geller is Monica´s older brother
·he works as a paleontologist
·now he is a teacher at New York University
·he married three times
·his first wife was Carol and they were married for four years à until Carol realized that she was a lesbian
·she got pregnant before the divorce and gave birth to Ross´son Ben à who is now nine years old
·his second love was Julie à who he met in grad school
·they worked together in China and broke up when he found out that Rachel loved him
·Rachel Green is number three à best friend of Monica
·Ross said her name during the marriage with his second wife Emily
·she didn´t trust him anymore because he mistaken the names before the altar
·they divorced
·Ross and Rachel travelled to Las Vegas were she got drunk together
·the result was a marriage which ended with the divorce
·six weeks before Chandler´s wedding Rachel gave birth to Ross´daughter Emma
·the relationship had a lot of heights and lows
·only in the last season Rachel and Ross gather again

Courteney Cox

·she was born on June 15th, 1964
·her father Richard L. Cox was a business man who was married to her mother Courteney
·she has two older sisters Virginia and Dottie and an older brother Richard Junior
·Courteney was raised in an exclusive society town, Mountain Brook in Alabama
·in 1974 her parents divorced and her father moved to Florida
·she attended Mountain Brook High School where she was a cheerleader, tennis player and swimmer
·in her final year , she appeared her first taste of modelling
·after her graduation she left Alabama to study architecture and design at Mount Vernon College
·after one year she dropped out to pursue a modelling career in New York
·while modelling she attended acting classes
·her real dream was to be an actress
·in 1984 she landed a small part in one episode of “ As the World turns”
·few years later she was chosen out to play Michael J. Fox´s girlfriend in “Family Ties”
·other films like “Mr. Destiny” or “Ace Ventura” followed
·in 1994 she was casted as Monica Geller on the sitcom “Friends”
·this role turned her into an international superstar
·in 1996 Cox starred in the “Scream” trilogy à it was a big success
·there she met her husband David Arquette
·they married in 1999 in San Francisco
·in 2004 she gave birth to their first daughter Coco Riley Arquette
·Courteney can play piano and drums
·she is a fan of “Foo Fighters”, drives Jaguar and Porsche Carrera and has her own lipstick called “Cece” by Cargo

Monica Geller


·the compulsively clean chef Monica Geller
·in her youth she was very overweight
·Monica has a very distinctive ordinal and cleaning compulsion
·the apartment of her and Rachel is one of the central settings
·in the course of the series she works in different restaurants as a cook
·Monica hasn´t a good relationship to her parents à these preferred always her brother Ross
·she had many catastrophic, short relations during the seasons of Friends
·from the fifth season, she is associated with Chandler
·the couple marries in the eights relay
GAST stellte diese Frage am 14.04.2006 - 18:14

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 18:18
also
sry aba sooo große langeweile hab ich dann vllt. doch nich ;-)

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 18:21
ein fehler hab ich schon mal high school du hast schoola`geschrieben!

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 18:22
sorry aber so viel Text...

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 18:25
Julie à who he met in grad school
du sachreibst dauernd á ?
naja einmal heißt es gathered und einmal many catastrophics (wenns das gibt?) naja aber etwas zu lang um ganz zulesen

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 18:27
the relationship had a lots of heights and lows, glaub ich

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 18:31
the compulsively clean boss Monica Geller, chef bedeutet küchenchef

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 18:33
Monica hasn´t a good relationship to her parents because they preferred always her brother Ross, das andere hört sich doof an und kene ahnung was das auch heisse sollte

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 18:37
ich glaub da reicht meine zeit nicht mehr aus sorry

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 18:38
habs aber nur gründlicher überflogen, also ich denke sonst ist all right, aber dieses a mit strich ist mir unerklärlich. habe mir auch ne bissl mühe gegeben! war interessant, doch doch *lol* BIDDÖ!

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 19:04
also erstmal nicht he raised, denn raise heißt großziehen, also
he grew up
und dann entweder he is a Jew oder he is Jewish, du kannst nicht einfach Adjektive als Substantive gebrauchen
dann hab ich keinen Plan, was du damit meinst, dass er dem Schaupielern ausgesetzt war, schlag nochmal genau nach was du wolltest, denn so kann das nicht stimmen
dann: After he had completed the course (wär auch ganz gut wenn du sagen würdest was für ein course) an instructor encouraged him
---> du musst nämlich die richitge Zeit verwenden, denn er hat seinen Kurs abgeschlossen, bevor er motiviert wurde
dann ist es stilisitsch besser zu sagen: after he had graduated from high school als after his graduation (beachte auch hier wieder die ZEit!)
und dann kann man nicht sagen following his graduation
sag einfach Afterwards in 1988
und dann weiß ich nicht was du mit stage-acting credits meinst, vlt gibt es das ja wirklich, aber wenn du seinen Ruf meinst wäre reputation besser oder wenn du seinen Erfolg meinst nimm success
außerdem he had his debut nicht made
zudem ergibt der ganze darauffolgende Satz KEINEN Sinn, aahhhhhhhh
( wer ist dein Englischlehrer? )
wenn er sein debut in der Serie gemacht hat, dann solltest du schreiben he had his debut in a series called "Monty", wenn du das meintest, denn wenn du as in diesem Zusammenhang benutzt würde das heißen, dass er sein Debut als Serie macht und da MEnschen keine Serien sind, sondern höchstens in ihnen spielen würde das keinen Sinn ergeben
zudem his favourite food is Bagels und Pizza, denn food ist singular
außerdem heißt es: he is well-known oder famous because of his role

also wenn ich dir nen Tipp geben darf, schau dir die "Englische Grammatik" unbedingt nochmal an,
ehrlich gesagt kann ich auch gar nicht verstehen, warum du einen so langen Vortrag in Englisch hälst, obwohl es dir anscheinend gar nicht so liegt,
egal, ich wünsche dir trotzdem viel Glück,
PS: ein paar Paritizpial Konstruktionen machen sich auch immer gut zB
After having graduated he did this or that ...

Und: Keep it as simple as possible

PPS (auch ich kann Fehler machen aber zu 99% bin ich mir sicher mit dem was ich geschrieben habe, denn Rest soll jemand anders korrigieren ich hab jetzt keine Lust mehr)

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 19:10
und noch ne kurze Anmerkung zur Position von Adverbien, da du die auch öfters missachtest
Her parents always preferred her brother

wenn be das Verb ist wird das Adverb danach gestellt

Her parents are always nice

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 19:15
hatte da jemand langeweile

 
Antwort von GAST | 14.04.2006 - 21:38
.. he is well-known for his role as Ross Geller in the sitcom Friends
(meinem wörterbuch zufolge ist "for" die präposition, die well-known verlangt und nicht "of")

Ross Geller

· the three time divorced paleontologist Ross Geller
· Ross Geller is Monica´s older brother
· he works as a paleontologist
· now he is a teacher at New York University
· he married three times
· his first wife was Carol and they HAD BEEN married for four years BEFORE Carol realized that she was a lesbian
· she got pregnant before the divorce and gave birth to Ross´son Ben who is now nine years old
· his second love was Julie who he met in grad school(ich hab das wort grad school noch nicht gehört, aber so gut kenn ich mich mit dem amerikanischen schulsystem nicht aus...)
· they HAD worked together in China and broke up when he found out that Rachel loved him
· Rachel Green is MONICA`S (THIRD) BEST FRIEND oder ONE OF MONICA`S BEST FRIENDS
· Ross said her name during the marriage with his second wife Emily
· she didn´t trust him anymore because he HAD MIXED UP/HAD MISTAKEN the names AT the altar
· they GOT divorced
· Ross and Rachel travelled to Las Vegas were she got drunk together ?
· AS A RESULT THEY MARRIED BUT LATER ON GOT DIVORCED AS WELL
· six weeks before Chandler´s wedding Rachel gave birth to Ross´daughter Emma
· the relationship had a lot of heights and lows
· only in the last season Rachel and Ross gather again(GET TOGETHER AGAIN)

Courteney Cox

· she was born on June 15th, 1964
· her father Richard L. Cox was a business man who was married to her mother Courteney
· she has two older sisters Virginia and Dottie and an older brother Richard Junior
· Courteney was raised in an exclusive society town, Mountain Brook in Alabama
· in 1974 her parents GOT divorced and her father moved to Florida
· she attended Mountain Brook High School where she was a cheerleader, tennis player and swimmer
· in her final year , she REVEALED? her first taste of modelling
· after her graduation she left Alabama to study architecture and design at Mount Vernon College
· after one year she dropped out OF SCHOOL to pursue a modelling career in New York
· while modelling she attended acting classes
· her real dream was to be an actress
· in 1984 she landed a small part in one episode of “ As the World turns”
· few years later she was PICKED OUT/CHOSEN to play Michael J. Fox´s girlfriend in “Family Ties”
· other films like “Mr. Destiny” or “Ace Ventura” followed
· in 1994 she was casted as Monica Geller on the sitcom “Friends”
· this role turned her into an international superstar
· in 1996 Cox starred in the “Scream” trilogy WHICH was a GREAT success
· there she met her husband David Arquette
· they married in 1999 in San Francisco
· in 2004 she gave birth to their first daughter Coco Riley Arquette
· Courteney can play THE piano and drums
· she is a fan of “Foo Fighters”, drives A Jaguar and A Porsche Carrera and has her own lipstick called “Cece” by Cargo

Monica Geller

· the compulsively clean chef Monica Geller
· in her youth she was very overweight
· Monica has a very distinctive cleaning compulsion AND THE URGE TO KEEP EVERYTHING CLEAN
· the apartment WHERE RACHEL AND SHE LIVE is one of the central settings
· in the course of the series she works in different restaurants as a cook
· Monica DOESN`T HAVE a good relationship to her parents AS theY ALWAYS PREFER her brother Ross
· she had many catastrophic, short-TERM relationSHIPS during the seasons of Friends
· from the fifth season, she is TOGETHER with Chandler
· the couple marries in the eightH SEASON(RELAY WIRD NUR IM SPORTLICHEN ZUSAMMENHANG ALS STAFFEL VERSTANDEN)

hih

 
Antwort von GAST | 19.04.2006 - 18:47
ich denke man kann beides sagen, sowohl, he is well-known for und he is well-known because of , da because of ja eine feststehender Begriff ist, aber ich will ja jetzt nicht auch als Erbsenzähler dastehen ;-)

aber mich würde doch nun sehr interessieren, was nun aus dem Vortrag geworden ist :-)

 
Antwort von GAST | 19.04.2006 - 18:52
@ Ambrosia: also ich wollt auch nicht iwie besserwisserisch oda so sein, habs nur so angemerkt, aber in meinem wörterbuch steht auch viel shice, von daher... ;-)


ich wär ehrlich gesagt auch gespannt wies gelaufen is :-)

 
Antwort von GAST | 19.04.2006 - 19:30
Also erstmal ein ganz liebes Dankeschön für eure Mühe!
Hatte mich übrigens nicht freiwillig für so einen Vortrag
gemeldet, sondern jeder in der Klasse muss eine Serie vorstellen!
Der Termin wurde jetzt auf nächste Woche verschoben!
Werd euch dann schreiben was es geworden ist!
Also nochmal DANKE an alle!

 
Antwort von GAST | 19.04.2006 - 19:33
*lol* oh da musste aber nochmal üben =)

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