Neu:Korreturlesung bei englischer bewerbung.

(Das hereby brauchst du nicht, auch im deutschen ist das "hiermit" eigentlich überflüssig - womit denn sonst?) I want to apply for the trip to Charlotte from the 20th of October until the 6th of November 2010.
Since I have heard of the possibility to go on a trip to Charlotte, the idea of participation has not left my mind.
There are several reasons why I want to go there.
First of all I want to gain as much international experience as I can and I think it would be a good idea to start early.
Secondly, I enjoy experiencing new cultures and getting to know everything that is “not made in Germany“. So going to Charlotte would be a great opportunity for me to learn more about a different way of life and meet interesting local students at the same time.
Furthermore, I would like to improve my English. Even if it’s quite good, it is not fluent yet - and that is what I want it to be.
Maybe the most important thing is that one gets to know one`s strengths and weaknesses and learns how to become more open-minded to approach strangers with a self-assured attitude.

Vielleicht noch einen abschließenden Satz, der das alles abrundet?

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