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Report - healthy school food

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Hallo, ich habe hier meinen report und ich wäre euch sehr Dankbar, wenn ihr den verbessern könntet.
Danke!
Jenny

To: Mr.
Hubert
From: Jenny
Date: 08.08.2017
Subject: Analysis of healthier school food of our class

Introduction
The bar chart is an overview of the healthy food plans of the students of my class.
In general, most of the students are in complete agreement with the food wishes at school.

Healthier school food plans at our school

According to the interviews, over 20% of the boys want to have Spaghetti, roast chicken and nearby 30% by Pizza. By the girls are the favourites foods of the boys not very popular. However, girls want more roast chicken.
In addition to that only 10% of the girls like salad more than Baguette. Besides by the boys, they did not like so much salad or Baguette. It is obvious that the Vegetable stew nobody wants to have at school. It can see that the girls wanted to have vegetables at school maybe they are vegetarians. But no boy wants to have this kind of food at his school.
In comparison with Sausage and ships and Jacket potatoes is the chart on both sides nearly the same. The line by the girls is over 10% and by the boys by the jacket potatoes it is a little bit under the line.
The statistics say that the boys want to have pizza at school, while the girls want to have mote roast chicken.

Recommendation
On our school, there are sweets from vending machines and on our new school food canteen there is all too expensive to eat every day healthy and good.
To make the school food cheaper and affordable for everyone, I recommend offering cooking courses at school. On the one hand, every student learns for his life how to make simple and delicious healthy food and on the other hand every student would like it when they know the food what they eat like pizza or roast potatoes are cheap, healthy and furthermore self-made.

Conclusion
All in all, the chart above underlines the fact that, junk food is still the favourite food of students.
Fact is, the majority of girls really like roast chicken and the boys love pizza.
Frage von Jenny01997 | am 08.08.2017 - 14:59


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Antwort von olgar | 15.08.2017 - 11:32
To: Mr. Hubert
From: Jenny
Date: 08.08.2017
Subject: Analysis of healthier school food of our class

Introduction
The bar chart is an overview of the healthy food plans of the students of my class.
In general,
most of the students are in complete agreement with the food wishes at school.

Healthier school food plans at our school

According to the interviews, over 20% of the boys want to have Spaghetti, roast chicken and nearby 30% by Pizza (Diesen Satz bitte umschreiben. Ist verwirrend.). By the girls are the favourites foods of the boys not very popular. The boys` favourite dishes are not very popular with girls. However, girls want more show a higher preference towards roast(ed) chicken.
In addition to that, only 10% of the girls like salad more than baguette. Besides by the boys, they did not like so much salad or Baguette. It is obvious that nobody wants to eat the vegetable stew at school. As more girls want to have vegetables at school it is possible that there are more vegetarians among them. In our study, no boy wants to have this kind of food at his school.
When comparing sausage, chips, and jacket potatoes, the charts on all sides are nearly the same. For jacket potatoes, the girls` line (What line?) is over 10% and by the boys by the jacket potatoes it is a little bit under the line.
The statistics say that the boys want to have pizza at school, while the girls want to have more roast chicken.

Recommendation
In our school, there are sweets from vending machines whereas in our new school, food canteen is all too expensive to eat healthy and good every day.
To make the school food cheaper and affordable for everyone, I recommend offering cooking courses at school. On the one hand, every student learns how to make simple and delicious healthy food. On the other hand, every student would like it if they knew the food that they eat, like pizza or roast potatoes, can be cheap, healthy and furthermore self-made.

Conclusion
All in all, the chart above underlines the fact that junk food is still the favourite food of students.
Fact is, the majority of girls really like roast chicken and the boys love pizza.


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Antwort von Jenny01997 | 18.08.2017 - 14:09
Vielen Dank für die Verbesserung! Ich wollte noch fragen ob das auch ein Report ist? Schreibt man den so?


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Antwort von Ritchy (ehem. Mitglied) | 18.08.2017 - 14:51
Hi Jenny, ich habe mal gegooglet/gebingt (lol): Aufbau eines Reports, da kommt eine ganze Menge an Vorschlägen. Da gibt es auch die Bemerkung, man solle Schlagworte in der Überschrift verwenden, statt Einleitung, Hauptteil, Zusammenfassung...Statt introduction vielleicht: Healthy food for stressed students...also Gesundes Essen für getresste Schüler..., statt Conclusion: Junk food not replaceable, also junk food nicht erstzbar/verdrängbar.


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Antwort von Jenny01997 | 18.08.2017 - 14:59
Ok Danke ☺

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