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Bitte verbessern einfach alles was falsch geschrieben ist, was mit dem Satzzusammenhang nicht passt, Vergangenheitsformen......!
 

Dear Lara,

In my half term holidaystwo weeks ago, I went to a lake in Austria.
My friend Selina and my sisterEdith went with me but I was sad that you coudn`t come with us. We were ice skatingevery day because the weather was good.

All the days Selina was the best because she laerned ice skating whenshe was six years old. One day we went after lunch ice skating. We weared our skatingshoes and she started ice skating.. We played catching oneanother. And then ithappend: My sister wanted to catch me but I was some metres away and she wasnot so good at ice scating. She had an accident and we had to call theambulance.   The ambulance came fast and broughtmy sister to the nearest hospitel. Fortunately she was already fit again thenext hour!

I liked the great lake and the much ice skating hours but i didn‘t likethe eating in the hotel.

I hope you are well,

Love Johanna.
Frage von Clara4444 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 04.03.2015 - 17:03


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492		 Antwort von Ratgeber | 04.03.2015 - 21:10
Dear Lara, 

in my half term holidays (was soll das sein? Herbstferien=>autumn holiday /autumn vacation; Semesterferien=>semester break) two weeks ago, I went to a lake in Austria.
My friend Selina and my sister Edith joined me but I was sad that you couldn`t come along with us. We skated every day because the weather was good (weather was good=> klares Wetter; gutes Wetter=> fine weather). 

All the days (besser: All the time)Selina was the best because she has learned skating since she was six years old. One day we went skating after lunch (Reihenfolge geändert). We wore (!) our skates and she started ice skating. We played tag (Fangen spielen). And then it happend: My sister wanted to catch me, but I was a few metres away and she was not so good at ice scating. She had an accident and we had to call the ambulance which  came quickly and brought my sister to the nearest hospital. Fortunately the next hour she was on her feet  again!  

I liked the great lake and the lots of skating hours but I didn‘t like the food in the hotel.  

I hope you are well,  

Love Johanna.

 
 Antwort von ANONYM | 04.03.2015 - 21:27
Dear Lara,
During my half term holidays two weeks ago, I went to a Lake in Austria. My friend Selina and my sister Edith came along, as well but I was still sad that you couldn`t come with us. Because the weather was nice we went ice-skating every day.

Selina was always best at skating because she has been skating since the age of six One day we went skating after lunch. We all wore our skating shoes and she (who?) started to skate. We all played catch, chasing one another. That`s when it happened: my sister who is not very good at skating wanted to catch me when I was still a few metres away. Unfortunately she had an accident and we had to call an ambulance. It arrived very quickly and took my sister to the nearest (next) hospital. Fortunately she felt much better soon and was back on her feet after only an hour!

I loved the big lake and the many hours we spent ice-skating but I wasn`t very fond of the food at the hotel.
I hope this letter finds you well (you are well),

Love, Johanna


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13		 Antwort von Clara4444 (ehem. Mitglied) | 05.03.2015 - 14:20
Danke für die Hilfe!

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