Summary Kontrolle: In the Outback

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The text `In the Outback` is a part of the novel `A prayer for Blue Delaney` by Kirsty Murray deals with two people, who work and live in the Outback. 

Colm is an orphan, who was sent from the UK to Australia because it`s wants to increase their population.
He live in a home for boys, but the people are evil and he decides to run away. After the police searching him, he gets to know and Old man Bill. They travel through the Australia Outback to The Dog Fence, where Bill hope to get work. After they arrive the Dog Fence, they get some little jobs, like repair the Fence. The same jobs some days. One day Bill`s Dog Rusty eats a dingo bait poison. Nevertheless she is alive, because Bill gives her salt water to drink and Colm prays. 
They get one day the job to look for a wild boar, which makes trouble. After they find the boar it is aggressive and attacks Bill and Rusty and send them flying. The boar and Colm delivered a fight, finally Colm kill the boar with a gun. Suddenly Bill pass out and Colm must to drive home to get help. But the old ute from Bill died completely in the middle of the outback. As a result he must run more than a mile home in the burning heat. In a nutshell he arrives the village, gets help and falls asleep.