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Summary - It`s a new black-white language

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Hallo :)

Kann mir jemand vielleicht mein Summary durchlesen und kontrollieren ? Manche Sätze klingen etwas merkwürdig :D
Vor allem bei den Zeitformen bin ich mir unsicher.




The article „It`s a new black white language“ by Steven Swinford and Laura St Quinton, appeared in The Sunday Times. The article asserts that there is a new muli-ethic dialect, that will spread and become a part of everyday English over the next years.

Britain`s first multi-ethnic dialect is identifited. It is a variant of English with some words and sounds from other languages. Reseachers believe that it become a part of everyday English over the next 20 Years, because today the teenager of different ethnic groups use it to communicate across the racial divide. The multi-ethnic kind of speech ist speaken in multicultural cities and will become more mainstream. The spread of the dialect is being encouraged by successful London rap stars and aided by the BBC youth radio station. Profesor Paul Kerwills team made a study that involved analyzing the conversation of 32 teenagers aged 16 to 18 at an innercity college in Hackney, east London and identified the dialect for the first time. All the students there used the same multi-ethnic dialect, regardless of their background.
The multi-ethic dialect is replacing the traditional cockney in the East end of London and some concerns also use it. But because the language in the formal world is standart english the Lilian Baylis school in south London banned the dialect from the classroom as a part of a government project to improve results.
The dialext arent` allowed including essays or debates, but that don`t mean that the school is trying to devalue patois. They accept it in certain circumstances and teach the pupils that there is a time and a place for it.

Today the multi-ethnic dialect is a part of the language from teenagers and it will spread and become a bigger part, but the formal language in the world is and will still be standart english.



Hoffe der Text ist einigermaßen verständlich geschrieben :)
Frage von MyMusicLove (ehem. Mitglied) | am 26.09.2012 - 16:17


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Antwort von goldenoldie (ehem. Mitglied) | 26.09.2012 - 17:13
Zitat:
The article „It`s a new black white language“ by Steven Swinford and Laura St Quinton, appeared in The Sunday Times.
The article asserts that there is a new muli-ethic dialect, that will spread and become a part of everyday English over the next years.

Britain`s first multi-ethnic dialect is identifited?. It is a variant of English with some words and sounds from other languages. Reseachers believe that it become a part of everyday English over the next 20 Years, because today the teenager of different ethnic groups use it to communicate across the racial divide. The multi-ethnic kind of speech ist speaken in multicultural cities and will become more mainstream. The spread of the dialect is being encouraged by successful London rap stars and aided by the BBC youth radio station. Profesor Paul Kerwills team made a study that involved analyzing the conversation of 32 teenagers aged 16 to 18 at an innercity college in Hackney, east London and identified? the dialect for the first time. All the students there used the same multi-ethnic dialect, regardless of their background.
The multi-ethic dialect is replacing the traditional cockney in the East end of London and some concerns also use it. But because the language in the formal world is standart englishthe Lilian Baylis school in south London banned the dialect from the classroom as a part of a government project to improve results.
The dialext arent` allowed including essays or debates, but that don`t mean that the school is trying to devalue patois. They accept it in certain circumstances and teach the pupils that there is a time and a place for it.
Today the multi-ethnic dialect is a part of the language from teenagers and it will spread and become a bigger part, but the formal language in the world is and will still be standart english.


überprüfe bitte selbst die fett unterlegten Wörter; hier hast du Fehler gemacht.


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Antwort von MyMusicLove (ehem. Mitglied) | 26.09.2012 - 17:38
Danke für deine Hilfe ^-^
Ich habe den Text noch einmal überarbeitet, aber ich verstehe nicht was an den fett unterlegten Wörtern falsch sein soll und wa sich dort ändern sollte.

Zitat:
Britain`s first multi-ethnic dialect is located. It`s a variant of English and it`s sounds like other languages. Reseachers believe that it become a part of everyday English over the next 20 years, because today the teenagers of different ethnic groups use it to communicate over the racial divide. The kind of speech is speaken in multicultural cities and will get more mainstream. The spread of the dialect is being encouraged by successful London rap stars and aided by the BBC. Profesor Paul Kerwills team made a study which involved analyzing the conversation of 32 teenagers aged 16 to 18 at an innercity college in Hackney at the east side of London and identified the dialect for the first time. The students there are used to speak the same multi-ethnic dialect, regardless of their background.
The multi-ethic dialect is replacing the traditional cockney in the East end of London and some concerns also use it. Although the language in the formal world is standard english the Lilian Baylis school in south London banned the dialect from the classroom as a part of a government project to improve results.
The dialect are not allowed including essays or debates. That don`t mean that the school is trying to devalue the patoi. They accept it in certain circumstances and teach the pupils that there is a time and a place for it.




Hoffe er ist so besser.
Bei identifited, muss ich da etwa identifite nehmen ? Also Gegenwartsform oder warum ist das falsch ?


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Antwort von goldenoldie (ehem. Mitglied) | 26.09.2012 - 17:48
Was soll den "identified" hier heißen? Besser wäre "analysed"

become muss "will become" werden (Signalwort: in 2o Years)

Paul Kerwil`s (Posessiv-Form)

East Endist ein Name muss groß geschrieben werden

Standard English muss beides groß geschrieben werden (Eigen- /Sach-Name)

3.letzte Zeile:
Zitat:
dialect are
the dialect IS

"patoi" ist falsch geschrieben: "patois" (= the ungrammatical mixture of two or more languages)


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Antwort von MyMusicLove (ehem. Mitglied) | 26.09.2012 - 20:37
Danke für deine schnelle und hilfreiche Hilfe ;)

Identified sollte identifiziert heißen :D


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Antwort von goldenoldie (ehem. Mitglied) | 26.09.2012 - 21:37
"identifiziert" macht doch gar keinen Sinn!

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