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Überprüfung eines company profiles(english) auf RS/Grammatik

Frage: Überprüfung eines company profiles(english) auf RS/Grammatik
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So ich saß jetzt den ganzen Morgen an diesem copany profile dran, sehe aber wahrscheinlich bei einigen Fehlern den Wald vor lauter Bäumen nicht mehr... ;)

Könnt ihr den Text bitte einmal überprüfen?
Falls ihr sonst noch etwas bemerkt, beispielsweise inhaltlicher Natur, ich bin euch ganz Ohr ^^

DANKE!



Company Profile of Steinhaus

The Steinhaus GmbH is a traditional company which is headquartered in Remscheid-Lennep. A German GmbH is a limited liability company roughly equivalent to a Private Limited Company in the UK or a Closed Corporation in the USA, but not exactly the same.
The company was found in the year 1841 as a butcher shop from Johann-Peter Steinhaus. With more than 330 employees and about 20 apprentices Steinhaus developed to a medium-sized company in North-Rhine Westphalia. Today our family business runs successfully in its 5th generation and sells its products into 14 different countries. We produce a wide range of fresh food. So we have produced meat and sausage since 1841 and pasta and sauce specialties since 1985, mostly for large supermarkets and our own butcher shops that are situated throughout Germany. In the last year we produced in the average over 80 tons meat and sausage and over 400 tons pasta and sauce specialties per week and earned with the sales about 106 million euro. The slogan Steinhaus is “Eat happy”. Environmental protection and social involvement have been strong key factors of our company´s philosophy. For this reason we promote a number of different projects. Furthermore Steinhaus stands for high quality, reliability, performance and pioneer spirit in fresh products. So is continuous improvement a part of our corporate culture.
Frage von Campino_wk | am 04.03.2012 - 09:06

 
Antwort von GAST | 04.03.2012 - 11:50
Company Profile of Steinhaus
The Steinhaus GmbH is a traditional company which is headquartered in Remscheid-Lennep. A German GmbH is a limited liability company roughly equivalent to a Private Limited Company in the UK or a Closed Corporation in the USA,
but not exactly the same.
The company was founded in the year 1841 as a butcher shop from Johann-Peter Steinhaus. With more than 330 employees and about 20 apprentices Steinhaus developed into ...


...weiter komm ich nicht.
finde schlachtbetriebe (...und die mengenangaben ...und die begeisterung dafür...) ekelhaft.

- alles in allem ist das sehr gutes englisch.
- ich glaube nicht, dass man ne gmbh in so einem text erklären muss
- im business-english (und den zugehörigen begriffen, schreibweisen und hilfswörtern) bin ich auch nicht sonderlich fit.
- im zweifelsfalle poste den text mal bei busuu.com, oder so.

vielleicht hilft dir hier aber auch nen schmerzfreier englisch-profi :/


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Antwort von Campino_wk | 04.03.2012 - 12:44
Ok, ich danke dir dennoch für deinen Einsatz.
Ich kenne einige bei uns im Betrieb, die schon nach kurzer Zeit wieder weg waren.
Vorallem wenn die Salamis geräuchert werden ^^, verdreht das den Vegetariern den Kopf...

Das mit der GmbH ist nur auf Wunsch unserer Lehrerin, ich fand es auch etwas Fehl am Platz ;)


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Antwort von Chazzy | 04.03.2012 - 13:02
The Steinhaus GmbH is a traditional company which is headquartered in Remscheid-Lennep. A German GmbH is a limited liability company roughly equivalent to a Private Limited Company in the UK or a Closed Corporation in the USA, but not exactly the same.
The company was founded in the year 1841 as a butcher shop by Johann-Peter Steinhaus. With more than 330 employees and about 20 apprentices Steinhaus developed into a medium-sized company in North-Rhine Westphalia. Today our family business runs successfully in its 5th generation and sells its products in 14 different countries. We produce a wide range of fresh food. We have produced meat and sausages since 1841 and pasta and sauce specialties since 1985, mostly for large supermarkets and our own butcher shops, which are situated throughout Germany. Last year we produced in average over 80 tons of meat and sausages and over 400 tons of pasta and sauce specialties per week and earned about 106 million euros (with the sales). The slogan of Steinhaus is “Eat happy”. Environmental protection and social involvement have been strong key factors of our company´s philosophy. For this reason we promote a number of different projects. Furthermore, Steinhaus stands for high quality, reliability, performance and pioneer spirit in fresh products. So continuous improvement is a part of our corporate culture.


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Antwort von algieba (ehem. Mitglied) | 04.03.2012 - 16:32
The company was founded in 1841 as a butcher shop by Johann-Peter Steinhaus. (Das habe ich letztens schon mal verbessert...)

and earned about 106 million euro with the sales.

The slogan of Steinhaus is “Eat happy”.

Thus, continuous improvement is a part of our corporate culture. (Erst das Subjekt, dann das Verb...)

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