Global Warming: Referatvorbereitung kontrollieren

ich hab am freitag ein englisch referat zu halten über global warming. wäre nett wenn jemand kurz durchschauen könnte und paar wort-/grammatikfehler überprüfen könnte.


First of all, I want to tell something about what the kyoto protocol exectly is. The kyoto protocol is named by the region where the contract was signed, its the city kyoto in japan. The main topic of this contract was the reduction of greenhouse gases for 2% to the year 2012.
on the first trials of making a contract, their where just 55 nations accepted to decrease their greenhouse emissions. Nowadays we have 193 nations in the whole world which want to reduce their exhaust.
There is one greenhouse gas we all know about - the co2 . The government want to tell us that their is a relation beatween the co2 and the global warming . Now i want tell you some interesting facts about the co2.

In our air are 78percent of azote (N2) and 21 percent oxygen (O2) so there left 1 percent. These 1 percent comprised all noble gases with an amount of 0.963 percent.

That means that the The earth`s atomospere contains 0.038 percent CO2. From this 0.038 percent are 96percent produced by nature and just 4 percent are the result of human technologies.

4 percent of 0.038 percent are just 0.00152 percent for what the humanity is responsible for. Thats a pretty small number of co2.

But i continue with the calculation we now that germany have a part of 3,1 percent of the whole by human generated co2. That means that germany is responsible for 0,00004712 of the global co2.
We should keep in mind that germany took one of the leader positions to stop the global warming. We are paying 50 billions of taxes every year to stop the global warming. The result of the money is unproportional to what we realy can change. The kyoto protocol want to change 2% of 0.00152 that means we want to change the global warming by reducing the co2 for 0,0000304 percent.

At the end I consider that the co2 have nothing to do with the global warming. We have also the fact that co2 is heavier then air so it is always present close to the earth surface and not in the the upper levels of atmosphere. On the highness where the greenhouse affect is acting their are just 0.001 percent
for example that means 10 litre of co2 in 1million litre of oxygen.


ein bisschen viel rechnung. meint ihr das kann ich so vortragen ?