Story-ending korrektur bis morgen bitte

ich hab das so verstanden , dass alles von ihr ist.

Meanwhile a lucky thunderbolt hit the power plant and iniciated a total blackout so the rating computers turned off like thousands of televisions.
"What now? You`ve got what you wanted! The TV ratings are on today`s minimum." said Scout to Wayne.
"Yes, it`s time to give up." Wayne said seriously. "But before this happens I`m going to take you all to hell!"
"No! Have mercy with us!" said Bruce terrified.
In the meantime the luck hit them again in the truest sense of the word. A piece of the roof the SWAT has damaged fell down on Wayne`s head. First nobody could realize what happened but after seconds they woke up from their shock. The SWAT team entered the room and noticed Wayne`s death. All hostages got free and nobody was injured. They made a party because of their freeing. Five clowns danced around the SWAT units and sprayed water in their faces out of faked flowers. Last but not least Scout was punished by the court to 15 years of imprisonment.

Garantiere allerdings nicht fuer sinngemaesse Richtigkeit, weil ich deinen Text teiweise gar nicht verstanden habe. Du schreibst etwas unzusammenhaengend und ausserdem waere es sinnvoll den Rest der Geschichte zu kennen.