My family: Text zum Korrigieren - Klausurvorbereitung

Hallo,
ich schreibe morgen eine Englisch Arbeit und da müssen wir ein Familien text schreiben könntet ihr dass bitte koriggieren und vielleicht was hinzufügen weil das bisschen zu kurz ist.

Vielen Dank ^^

The following text is about my family. My family has about four persons, my mother, my father an my sister. My older sister is 21 years old, but she doesnt live with us, because she is married. After my parents my sister is the important person in my life, because she is the best sister of all. And then i love my cousin. My cousin is 14 years old and my best friend. My family is very important to me and i have a big family with 11 cousins. And they are beautiful persons. For me a family is very important, because a family is always with you. I want to have a family with two children a boy and a girl or maybe children i will adopt. To my family belong my pets, too. I have a hamster and a little dog. This isnt important for a Turkish family, but this is a prejudice. I love my dog, his name ist Paris. With your family you can laugh together and cried together. You can always explain your problems. But a family have potential problems,too. For example when you going out you must ask your mother or your father. Or you have a boyfriend all this are poblems. But a family is the best thing of my life. I love my big family and i dont want to my family.