Englisches Argument bitte korrigieren

Ich habe folgendes Argument zu der Aussage „Watching TV is the most popular leisure activity for british people. I find that‘s very depressing.“ - Jeremy Paxman (genaue Aussage ist mir leider entfallen, aber so in der Art)


Habe dazu folgendes englisches Argument verfasst und würde gerne Tipps bekommen, was ich verbessern könnte und euch bitten Fehler bitte zu korrigieren :) (ist ziemlich mein erstes englisches Argument, deshalb kann mein ansatz auch nicht ganz richtig sein, bitte auch korrigieren :)

Argument:
More and more british people watch TV several hours a day, according to Jeremy Paxman is that very depressing. First of all, this statement is not true because watching TV can provide for commonality in the family. Thus you can spend time with your family while watching any kind of TV show. For example, if a family watches a movie more often a week, they spend time together and may talk about the movie afterwards, which both promotes family life. Therefore one should notice, watching TV in your leisure time is certainly/definitely not depressing.