Englischtext bitte korrigieren- Probleme bei der Grammatik

hallo, kann mir bitte jemand diesen text wegen der Grammatik und vokabeln korrigieren? es sollte einfach ein text sein, was wir an einem tag erlebt haben. also ich hoffe, dass ich das einigermaßen richtig geschrieben habe und man versteht, was ich sagen möchte.

vielen lieben dank. ich habe am moisten probleme bei der Grammatik.
da dies ein „tagesbericht“ ist, darf man alle zeiten verwenden.
vielen lieben dank!


today i had a very funny and nice day. In the first place I must go at nine o’clock to my training place (Praktikumsplatz). I am driving with my bike. When I drove on a cyclepath I saw a man. He was circa 40 year old. He drive with a bike too, but he went freehand, so that he could wear a jacket. Unfortunately, this was not good for him. Suddenly, he went in the patch. I helped him to take the bike from the bushes. He said to me: “ Ohh, it´s embrassing to me now.” I must stop laughing and said to him: “Well, this can happen sometimes.” When he sat again on his bike, I wenr on. All at once it rustled extremely beside me in the bushes. There three droves flew out VOR MEIN FAHRRAD?. I shocked me so much. Then I went on and had to laugh all the time because of the bike rider in the bushes and laugh about the situation with the droves.
By the afternoon I was bored. Afternoon I had the task of a soccer group, where children 3-6 years to train. The children were very good mood (most any) and it has made so much fun with them.
Fortunately I had help from Oli. (The real coach is ill). On this day, three new children were to be visited every three years old. They were very cute, but it was very hard with them.
One little boy was always on the ball, the other only had the ball in his hand and the next the whole time cried without reason, unless he could just across the hall to run, without which he is shot down. Oli and I have always tried to comfort (trösten) him, but without success.
At the end of the training session, we were pretty broke, but it gave us a lot of fun. Oliver and I then decided that we shall together a team to train. We are still not sure at what age they should be. I hope that everything will work. The training session was a great experience. Immediately, I must go back to training and maybe do I sign up immediately at the driving school to, hopefully there is not so full.

DAAAANKE