Kurz drüber schauen und korrigieren?Bitte

Hallo leutzz
würd mich freuen,wenn ihr mal kurz über meinen text schauen könntet und es eventuell korrigieren könntet.
Ist bisschen spät, ist mir auch bewusst aber ich versuche mal mein glück einfach :-)

First i want to mention that I do not find this article very informative.
The reader is not informed of student life, but rather on the subjective experiences of the author.
I think that Lee will not want to study and that the reason why he went to the University is another one.
Perhaps it was the wish of his family , I do not know.
I think that Lee Will is not suitable for studying, because he does not redeem his duties and responsibilities.
Someone who starts a study should also take responsibility for it.
A study requires more than just sitting in his complsory lessons.
This article shows me personally that it is very important to do his duties seriously.
If you start something, you also should end it.
You should not be taken the university lightly.
In addition, you should do the things for yourself and not for other people.( Man sollte das, was man tut für sich tun und nicht für andere )
It does not matter if you just studied because the parents would have it. That is always a reason that many students fail in the end and no success can be achieved.
I think that this article shows this case very clearly.
As a student you get many tasks etc. It draws, for example, into a new area, meet new people, establish new contacts. The student life can be very interesting. The nightlife is always sounds tempting, what we can also refer to the text.
It can happen very quickly, that one forgets his task and only dedicated to the fun. And that can have consequences, for example, that you must to leave the university.
Altough i find that the text is more entertaining than informative. But I think that this article provide the reader with something on the way there.
Especially young people who are in a new way of life depends. This article could be the basis of message to young people who think on it to begin with a study. The duties and obligations as a student should not be neglected.The study should first come up with the night life. Otherwise the consequences could be less enjoyable, as we saw in the text by Will Lee could.