Eng Aufsatz-->verbesserungswürdig (help me^^)

Hi Leute ich musste eine Bericht über meine Klassenfahrt nach Hamburg schreiben. Kann jemand mir bitte sagen wo noch Fehler sind (mein Englisch ist nicht das Beste :-D). Vielen Dank schon einmal im vorraus!


From Monday the 05.11. - Friday the 10.11.08 we had a school trip to Hamburg.
At Monday morning we met at 8 oŽclock by the school and then we waited and waited for the arrival of the bus but he didnŽt come.Then with 20 minutes lateness the bus finally arrived.
Now we could see why the bus was so late: A woman was at the wheel! The first of us were afflicted by doubts if we would ever arrive in Hamburg.
Shortly after we had store our bags we started.
First we had to pick up another class in Engelsheim which is in North Rhine – Westphalia. But that was a bigger problem than we all expected. All 5 minutes the bus driver (how I already said: it was a woman) had to rotate because sheŽd lose the right way. After ages we arrived in Engelsheim and picked up the other class. Eventually we could drove toward Hamburg. Because of some very long breaks, heavy traffic and because we were caught up in some traffic jams we arrived very late in Hamburg I think it was 18.30.
Our hotel had the name “Panorma inn” and the best on the hotel was the everyone had a TV and a fridge in his room. After we had entered our rooms we could go in the Supermarket or in a restaurant. At 21.30 we had to go at our rooms but Mr. Wendland and Mrs. Heinz-Lorenz located many of us which werenŽt in their rooms. So they stole our room-cards.
At Tuesday we had a city tour in Hamburg: It was very boring and the most of us listened to music or create fotos. After that we had a harbour tour that was boring to and some girls complained about seasickness.
After that we could go in the city or in the Dungeon in Hamburg. Then we could stay in the city or go back by tube. Later when all were back from the city we could do what we want until 21.30 (as always).
At Wednesday we went by bus to the “Timmendorfer Strand”. But the bus driver hold soliloquies at the microphone and we all had been stressed.When we arrived we visited first the “Sealife-Center” it shows the habitat of the waters in Schleswig-Holstein plus it has a very large tropical sea pool.
After our visit in the“Sealife-Center” we could go on the beach or stay in the city but we must be punctually by the bus.
At Thursday we went finally by bus to the “Heide Park Soltau” which have many cool attractions for example the “Desert Race” that have a speed limit of 100 km/h which are arrive in 2,4 seconds. Also there is the Colossos which is the tallest and fastest wooden roller coaster in Europe (second tallest and fastest world wide). At 18 oŽclock we started back to Hamburg. When we were back we could go do whatever we wanted. Later I think it was at 20.30 the most of us went by underground to the “Reeperbahn”. The Reeperbahn is a street in HamburgŽs St. Pauli. “The Reeperbahn” is one of the two centres of HamburgŽs nightlife. In German it is also called "die sündige Meile". There Mr. Wendland told us some informations and then we went in a pub where us was allowed to drink a (only one) big beer and at the end Mr. Wendland paid for all of us. Then we go back by the underground to the hotel.
At Friday we store or bags and drive back towards the “Eifel”. Because of many traffic jams and because the bus had a failure (we must hold in leverkusen) we arrived late (at 19.30) in Bitburg.