diary entry : orphans

Hallo ihr lieben, könntet ihr bitte mein Tagebucheintrag mal durchlesen und mir Verbesserungstipis geben ? Ich möchte den nämlich bei der Lehrerin abgeben, Danke.


Dear diary ,

My daily entries are almost always the same . . . but today and the night were probably the worst hours of my life.
We had a terrible storm last night. All my clothes are wet and I`m freezing .
The storm destroyed my self erected tent of sticks. My whole little home is destroyed . . . everything is dirty, wet and devastated.
I didn`t eat anything today and drank just one last little drop from my water bottle.
It`s horrible… I`m totally hungry and thirsty. I don`t have the strength to go to the next river to get water .
I don`t know what to do anymore . . . . .
Nobody is there to warm me up, to give me new strength and love me. I long so much for my family .
Can you believe that ? What would you do in my situation ?
I`m so u pset about everything that`s happened now .

I hope that yo u support me in difficult times .
If I had only one wish free, I would wish to be with my family .

I love yo u
See yo u tomorrow my diary