Kurzer Englischtext über Pelz: Bitte korrigieren

Hallo, für ein Projekt habe ich einen kurzen Text über die Produktion von Angora-Wolle geschrieben. Ich wäre sehr dankbar, wenn mir jemand Tipps oder Verbesserungsvorschläge zukommen lassen könnte.

Vielen Dank im Vorraus!

Fur isn ’ t just fashion … fur is also suffering of innocent living beings. There is no real reason to use fur of an animal just to wear it.
To produce angora woll rabbits are dragged out of their tiny cages so the workers can crop their fur. In some cases they even plug them while the rabbits are crying deafening.
After only a few years full of fear and cruelty, when they didn ’ t die from disease or injuries, they are slaughtered.
By now we have so many opportunities to produce and buy clothes in cruelty-free ways, so why are so many people that ignorant? PETA ZWEI gets involved in the fight against this cruel method because Galeria Kaufhof doesn`t want to ban angora-wool from their assortment of goods.