Kurzer Englischtext zum Korrigieren

Hallo leute :) ich muss nächste woche in die mündliche und muss mich ja am Anfang immer selbst vorstellen und dazu habe ich mal einen Text geschrieben. Wäre ganz nett wenn ihr mein Text korriegieren würdet.


My name is ... I am 18 years old and i live in stuttgart. I have two brothers. The one is older and the other one is younger than me. In my freetime i like to play football, I also like to meet my friends and whem the weather is fine i like to go to the swimming pool.
After school i want to study economy-engineering. I have applied for this study in different school for example in Karlsruhe, in Heilbronn and in Esslingen, therefore I think i have good chance to get a place for this study. Moreover I have heared that economy engineering should be very difficult but I think and I hope that I pass the exams there.

Danke im voraus :)