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A letter: Könnten Sie bitte meinen Text korrigieren. Danke

Frage: A letter: Könnten Sie bitte meinen Text korrigieren. Danke
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Dear Agony Aunt,
I have a big problem.
It is about my grandma. My grandma is very ill and last weekend she was knock out. My mum found she after one day and brang she into the hospital. Now my grandma lie in the hospital. After one week she didn`t wake up. The doctor told us that she have to die. He is`nt sure, but it looks like. I don`t want that grandma die. I really love her. she is as my mum. After school I came always to her, because my mum worked. We had project that we will make cookies at christmas. But she will die. I`m really sad and without her my life will be very difficult. Now I sit next to my grandma and she looks not good. How are my life without her? What do you think?
Best wishes, Lukas
Frage von Boldos (ehem. Mitglied) | am 09.12.2016 - 13:43


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 09.12.2016 - 19:28
I have a big problem. It is about my grandma. My grandma is very ill and last weekend she was knocked out. My mum found her after one day and brought her into the hospital. Now my grandma lies in the hospital. After one week she hasn`t woke up. The doctor told us that she (besser:) will die. He isn`t sure,
but it looks like. I don`t want that grandma dies. I really love her. She is as my mum. (Willst Du damit sagen: Sie ist wie meine Mama. Dann muss es heißen: She is like my mum). After school I always went to her, because my mum worked. We had planned that we will make cookies at Christmas (Feiertage immer groß schreiben). But she will die. I`m really sad and without her my life will be very difficult. Now I sit next to my grandma and she doesn`t really look good. How will my life be without her? What do you think?

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