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Dear Will,

I am writing this letter to thank you for all the things you have done for Marcus.
Not only that you had supported him during my suicide attempt, but also you`ve bought him new shoes.
They are really pretty, but it was not necessary.
I do not know how can I make it up.
You`ve probably much time and effort with Marcus.

He talks a lot about you. He goes every day after school to you. I think he saw you as a friend.
He needs someone like you right now. Someone who is there for him. I`m afraid I was recently not a good mother. I put my problems into the foreground and not my child. That was a very big mistake on my part. I have not processed the separation of Roger, my ex-husband. When I think of him it still does hurt. I am so depressed , that I can not even bring myself to work ... Do you see it, I only I write about my problems. I`m so sorry.

I`ll still go back to the reason why I have written the letter to you. It`s great of you that you are a good friend for Marcus` However, you have not to buy him any clothes or anything else. I give you the money for the shoes back, of course. We will see us at the SPAT. If you would like to do something with us utside of single meetings, you can report. Or you come and visit us by dinner. We would be delighted.

Yours sincerely
Fiona
Frage von peachgirL (ehem. Mitglied) | am 17.10.2012 - 17:56


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Antwort von LsD | 17.10.2012 - 23:25
You`ve probably spent ? much time and effort with Marcus.

He is visiting you every day after school. I think he saw (sees?) you as a friend.

..that I can not even bring (motivate?) myself to (go to) work ... Do you see it (weg!),
I only I write about my problems. I`m so sorry.

I`ll still (weg!) go back..

..something with both of us utside of single meetings (weg!), [i]please let me know[/i] you can report. Or you come and visit us by dinner
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Antwort von goldenoldie (ehem. Mitglied) | 18.10.2012 - 07:52
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I am writing this letter to thank you for all the things you have done for Marcus.
Not only that you [---] supported him during my suicide attempt, but also you`ve bought him new shoes. They are really pretty, but it was not necessary.
I do not know how I can make it up.
You` probably spent much time ____]with Marcus.

He talks a lot about you. every day He goes after school to you. I think he sees you as a friend.
He needs someone like you right now. Someone who is there for him. I`m afraid I recently was not a good mother. I put my problems and not my child into the foreground . That was a very big mistake on my part. I have not overcome the separation from Roger, my ex-husband. When I think of him it still does hurt. I am so depressed [--] that I can not even have the strength to go towork ... [---]you see it, I only I write about my problems. I`m so sorry.

I return to the reason why I am writing this letter to you. It`s great of you that you have become a good friend for Marcus` However, you do not have to buy him any clothes or anything else. I `ll give you the money for the shoes back, of course. We will meet at the SPAT. If you would like to do something with us apart from our single meetings, please tell me so.. Or you could come and have dinner with us.. We would be delighted.

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