Personal Introduction- Korrekturlesen

Hello first of all I would like to introduce myself. My name is .............. and I`m .. years old.

I was born on 18^th of September 1996 in .......
I have three brothers and one sister and I live in ........ with my mom and my dad.
I attended the primary school and the secondary school in .........
After there I started an apprenticeship as a mechanic. I graduated in March this year. Currently I work in a garage in ..........
In fall this year I start my civilian service at the Red Cross in ...........
I do it at the Red Cross because I think it is a good chance to learn something and to help people.
I do the A levels to improve my English skills and maybe to study technical engineering or something like this in my future.
I want to study because I want to be developer in a big company and to ern a good pay.
Now, I would like to tell you something about my hobbies and interests.
My most favourite hobby is working on cars because I really like this work.
I also enjoy playing football, skiing and meeting my friends.
And I spend the rest of my free time learning continuing education for my job.
And my motto is “Don’t dream it, do it.”

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