Speech about the topic ZIVILCOURAGE

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Good morning /afternoon /evening ladiesand gentlemen.

My name isMax May and I am delighted to be here today to talk to you about, whyyou must show courage.
As you all know,today we see many people, who were beaten, but insteadof they look and silent.„You have to do something about notto have blame. For that you need a heart spirit and a soft heart. Whenyou are the victim you also need help”
My talk is divided into 4 parts. I`llstart with what you all can do in the freetime against force andracism, then I will look at what you can do in the bus and theunderground, when you see problems. Then I will tell what you can doin fights, and finallyI will come to my conclusion. There I want tosum it up and why you should agree with me. I will be glad to answerany questions that you may have at the end.

Let me come to my first argument:What you can do aganist force or racisms is basically not to playthe hero. It is always right to call the emergency number by police.They will care about this problem and this is one methode to help thevictim .

The next important argument is that you can help the victim alsoin the bus or underground. Someone is offended or degraded ´. Firstyou could tell it the driver to call the police or you can tell otherpeople to scream with you or to whistle :,,Stop it, stop it.! Moreand more people jion in und the situation for the violentoffenders is bad because mybe he will be nerovus, don´t knwowhat to do and runs fast away.
Finally I would like to ponit out, ifpeople fights, you must do alarma , make noise... That meand you mustdo attention on the brawl. To do something little is better thanthinking about great feats. Every action changes the situation.Also a lot ofpeolple say , what we are do is joke. Show me your violations, it isstill fun. In my opinion this is mayhem.
Let me give you a shortoverview of what I have said.
So to summarise the mainpoints ofmy talk is that you must show courage. You mustn´t play the herobecause a little methode like to call the police or to tell otherthat the victim needs help can improve the situation.
To put it ina nutshell, you should agree with me because when the school islater, it could be enjoy for the people.
Allow yourself a fewminutes, the floor is yours.
Well that`s it from me. Thanks verymuch.