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We cant live without computers, can’t we?

Frage: We cant live without computers, can’t we?
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Hey, ich bin neu hier.
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In the following, I will write about my positive andnegative experience.
But first I want to write about computers general.Computer changed our lifes. We can do a lot of greatful with them like playinggames, hear music, chat with friends, surf in internet or write an essay. When I was a little boy, my parents had Computer. It wasapproximately 2005. I played regular games there because it was exciting andgreat fun. One or two years later they bought a new computer and luckily theold one was mine. Unfortunately it worked slow. However, I never needed itreally just for playing.  In the 6th class I got a new laptop. I was really happy becauseit was fastly and light. It was delightfully for doing homework. Additionelly,my friends bought a new one too so we could play together sometimes. However, Iam I bit sad because he’s going to be slow now. That’s why I will buy a new onethis Christmas. In other words I love the technical evolution. Moreover, youcan use it for everything but they cost a lot. 

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Frage von freddimity | am 25.11.2014 - 18:41


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Antwort von icasillas2306 | 30.11.2014 - 15:47
In the following I will write about my positive and negative experiences with computer. But first I would like to write about computers generally. 
Computer changed our life. We can do a lot of greatful things with them like playing games,
listening to music, chatting with friends, surfing in internet or writing an essay.  When I was a little boy (girl;), my parents had a computer. I played regularly games therewith because it was exciting and makes great fun. One or two years later they bought a new computer and luckily I got the old one. Unfortunately it worked slowly. However I never needed it really, but just for playing.  
In the 6th class I got my own new laptop. I was really happy because it was faster and very light. This one was delightfully for doing homework. Additionally my friends bought a new one, too, so we could play against each other. However, I am a little bit sad because he doesn`t work  very well anymore. That’s why I wish myself a new one for  this Christmas. 

In other words I love the technical revolution. Moreover, you can use it for everything but they cost a lots. 

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